作业帮在线等英语语法纠错（单词 语法）
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在线等英语语法纠错（单词 语法）
Here it comes; some people may think that the pet dogs can make up a big business market if we take some good measures to rule it.However I think we need to realize the serious situation.On account to pet dogs’ big population,high increasing rate,and all the serious effects such dog abandonment,diseases,and deaths it caused,we need to forbid keeping pet dogs in cities as soon as possible.The fact here is that now the increasing rate of our pet dog population is beyond our control,our cities have large population,the average space is smaller and smaller,additionally,we don’t have a sound law system to rule the rearing of pet dogs in cities as most Western countries,thus we should forbid keeping pet dogs in cities.
Here it comes; some people may think that the pet dogs can make up a big business market if we take some good measures to rule it.However I think we need to realize the serious situation.On account to pet dogs’ big population,high increasing rate,and all the serious effects such dog abandonment,diseases,and deaths it caused,we need to forbid keeping pet dogs in cities as soon as possible.The fact here is that now the increasing rate of our pet dog population is beyond our control,our cities have large population,the average space is smaller and smaller,additionally,we don’t have a sound law system to rule the rearing of pet dogs in cities as most Western countries,thus we should forbid keeping pet dogs in cities.
去掉make up 中的up;
to rule it中的it改为them;
the serious situation中的the改为a;
and all the 与serious effects之间加other;
such 与dog abandonment之间加as;
去掉it caused;因为这里的it 指代不清楚；
our cities前加because;
the average前加and;
smaller and smeller 后为句号；你怎么弄的标点符号这么乱呢?句子这么长,连连词也不记得加
Western countries后加do;
ok
to rule it中的it改为them;
the serious situation中的the改为a;
and all the 与serious effects之间加other;
such 与dog abandonment之间加as;
去掉it caused;因为这里的it 指代不清楚；
our cities前加because;
the average前加and;
smaller and smeller 后为句号；你怎么弄的标点符号这么乱呢?句子这么长,连连词也不记得加
Western countries后加do;
ok