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英语短文改错My heart was beating fast when I start to make the spe

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英语短文改错
My heart was beating fast when I start to make the speech.I had prepared very good but it was the first time for me to speak to so many student in the public.So I was very nervous when I began to speak.Luckily,the whole room was so quietly that I could easily make myself hear.After a while I became confident than before.Everyone listened carefully.I could see from our eyes that I was doing a good job.As soon as I finished speak,the students applauded.How an unforgettable experience!
1.start­­­­改为started 发生在过去的事情,故用一般过去时.
2.good 改为 well 需要用副词修饰动词prepared.
3.student 改为students many修饰可数名词复数,所以student 改为students.
4.去掉in the public 中的the n public是固定用法,意思是当众.
5.quietly 改为quiet 用形容词作表语.
6.hear 改为heard 这里想说“使我自己被听到”,所以hear 改为heard.
8.our 改为their 这里想说我可以从他们的眼睛中看出,所以our 改为their.
10.How 改为What experience是名词,所以How 改为What .