作业帮求大神帮我看看我这篇关于英雄联盟的英语升级演讲PPT有没有什么语法错误或者那些单词错误
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求大神帮我看看我这篇关于英雄联盟的英语升级演讲PPT有没有什么语法错误或者那些单词错误
Good afternoon,everyone.Welcome to my presentation my name is lin.First i will ask a question.what would you do when you stay at home?
watch the movies?study?or play cards?But for most of boys ,they may be...play computer games.
today I will introduce this game to everybody.
it is a competition game developed by an American company RoitGames,It is designed by the designers of dotA-Allstars.
It is just like a war
of two countries
and you will control
a hero to fight
for your country
.
In each of the game,there will be two teams
to fight,and every team is composed of five
People .Every person will choose a hero to
Control .the only goal is to win
Some may ask me how to win the game?today i will tell you,you need to a good partner,a good strategy and have a good state of mind.When you win the game you will feel successful.
I think the game is also a way we
communicate with the world
Game is sure to be interesting ,But for most student,It is just an entertainment when we are free.The most important thing is still study.
Good afternoon,everyone.Welcome to my presentation my name is lin.First i will ask a question.what would you do when you stay at home?
watch the movies?study?or play cards?But for most of boys ,they may be...play computer games.
today I will introduce this game to everybody.
it is a competition game developed by an American company RoitGames,It is designed by the designers of dotA-Allstars.
It is just like a war
of two countries
and you will control
a hero to fight
for your country
.
In each of the game,there will be two teams
to fight,and every team is composed of five
People .Every person will choose a hero to
Control .the only goal is to win
Some may ask me how to win the game?today i will tell you,you need to a good partner,a good strategy and have a good state of mind.When you win the game you will feel successful.
I think the game is also a way we
communicate with the world
Game is sure to be interesting ,But for most student,It is just an entertainment when we are free.The most important thing is still study.
“you need to a good partner.“to”
“I think the game is also a way we
communicate with the world.” a way to communicate with 就行了或者a way by which we can communicate with
还有就是有点Chinglish.不过作为展示不用太计较,大家就是听听口语表达而已
再问： 除了这些还有什么需要改的么？大神？
再答： 有ppt了肯定ppt吸引注意力，口语其实没那么严格，能表达清楚就行了，建议介绍游戏内容可以多说几句，比如the only goal is to win有点概括了，说成is to destroy the tower and enhibitor，加上配图啥的
“I think the game is also a way we
communicate with the world.” a way to communicate with 就行了或者a way by which we can communicate with
还有就是有点Chinglish.不过作为展示不用太计较,大家就是听听口语表达而已
再问： 除了这些还有什么需要改的么？大神？
再答： 有ppt了肯定ppt吸引注意力，口语其实没那么严格，能表达清楚就行了，建议介绍游戏内容可以多说几句，比如the only goal is to win有点概括了，说成is to destroy the tower and enhibitor，加上配图啥的
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