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求修改英语作文I dream of being a scientist and I want to be a busin

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求修改英语作文
I dream of being a scientist and I want to be a business.I thought that I will succeed.Although the result ins’t great ,I still believe I will be successful.And now I am frustrate.Because of the bad grades,I really want to cry.But you should know that I am a firm girl.In the
Old days,I cried.But now I don’t cry.Nobody will all the time succeed and smile.I think of my future,and I think of my past.I compare it ,and now I know why I got the bad grades.I will be optimistic,I thought the final exam I will get good grades.So I give up doing other things.
I will be succeed ,will
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My dream was being a scientist, now it is replaced by a businesswoman. I believe I will succeed.
It is not big though, but I insist on it. Now , I'm a little upset, as a the result of poor grades. I want to cry, really! But you know, I'm strong girl. I may cry in the olddays, not now. Nobody can remain success and smile all the time. I shall compare my past with the future, and find out the reason of getting poor grades. I shall keep smiling, and achieve good grades in final exam. I determine to give up things can distract my attention. I will succeed, won't I ?