要口试了,英文好的大侠帮我改改写的短文

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要口试了,英文好的大侠帮我改改写的短文
估计有好多错啦
what will you do to make yourself more beautiful?
i think i will be on a diet to make my figure more symmetrical.
then i will buy some beautiful clothes to dress up myself .
maybe i also can use a little cosmetic.
the most important things to make myself more beautiful is having confidence.
people who is confident is the most beautiful
furthermore ,i will read more book because i think if i have much knoeledge,others will like me more （这个估计用错了,更喜欢我怎么说啊?）and i will be more beautiful in others' eyes.

i think that i'm going to go on a diet to make myself more slime.
then,i will buy some beautiful clothes to dress myself up .
maybe i will also use a little cosmetic.
However,the most important thing i need to make myself more beautiful is confidence.
people who are confident are the most beautiful.
furthermore ,i will read more book because i think if i broaden my horizon,the others will like me more and i will be more beautiful in others' eyes.口语中不要用太过书面的词,还有你查了电子词典的痕迹很重

谁帮我改改这几句英文作文.我写的. 谁语文好,帮我改改的写的句子. 写了封信,大家帮着改改,英文的, 请改改语法这篇文章是我的英语作文,求大侠帮我改改. 帮我改改英文作文我作了一篇文,是要考口试的,大家看看能不能帮我修改一下.我知道有些地方有点错.开头结尾和为什麽喜欢圣诞节哪位大侠帮我写篇英文版的自我介绍!(我写好中文的) 我写了一篇介绍上海和杭州的文章,希望英语学的好的帮我改改好吗? 我写了一封英文信,但是英语不大好,有没有人帮我改改语法之类的, 帮我改改这段短文的错误. 请问英语好的高手能不能帮我把这一段英文语法错误的地方改改. 帮我把这两段英文改改语法错误.改好的作为答案帮忙改改我的英文作文,并帮我写个conclusion