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my mother the person I loved best is my mother, like many other chinese women, my mother is diligent, she works in a middle school, in order to teach well, she prepares her lectures very carefully and often works very late at night. mother is very kind. At home she treats my father very kind, she cares for me willingly. she treats my grandma as if she were own mother .whenever my grandma is ill in bed, my mother looks after her well, so my grandma loves her. besides, she get along well with her neighbors and colleagues.when they have difficulties, she is always ready to lend them a helpful hand. therefore she is loved and respected in our neighborhood, and in her school, not only is she a qualified mother , but also a good tutor in my life ,she always tell us to be uesful to society in the future. waht a good piece of advice it is ! I 'll keep it in my mind forever ,such is my mother, ordinary but great.
解题思路： My mother The person I loved best is my mother Like many other chinese women, my mother is diligent She works in a middle school In order to teach well, she prepares her lectures very carefully and often works very late at night My mother is very kind At home she treats my father very kindly, and she cares for me willingly She treats my grandma as if she were her own mother Whenever my grandma is ill in bed, my mother looks after her well, so my grandma loves her Besides, she gets along well
解题过程：
My mother
The person I loved best is my mother. Like many other chinese women, my mother is diligent. She works in a middle school. In order to teach well, she prepares her lectures very carefully and often works very late at night.
My mother is very kind. At home she treats my father very kindly, and she cares for me willingly. She treats my grandma as if she were her own mother .Whenever my grandma is ill in bed, my mother looks after her well, so my grandma loves her. Besides, she gets along well with her neighbors and colleagues. When they have difficulties, she is always ready to lend them a helpful hand. Therefore, she is loved and respected in our neighborhood, and in her school. Not only is she a qualified mother , but also a good tutor in my life. She always tells us to be a uesful person to society in the future. What a good piece of advice it is ! I 'll keep it in my mind forever.
Such is my mother, ordinary but great.
整篇文章中心明确，语义比较通顺，但是通篇最大的一个问题就是标点符号有点乱，很多都是逗号而没有句号。还有时态上注意第三人称单数的正确运用。具体见上。
解题过程：
My mother
The person I loved best is my mother. Like many other chinese women, my mother is diligent. She works in a middle school. In order to teach well, she prepares her lectures very carefully and often works very late at night.
My mother is very kind. At home she treats my father very kindly, and she cares for me willingly. She treats my grandma as if she were her own mother .Whenever my grandma is ill in bed, my mother looks after her well, so my grandma loves her. Besides, she gets along well with her neighbors and colleagues. When they have difficulties, she is always ready to lend them a helpful hand. Therefore, she is loved and respected in our neighborhood, and in her school. Not only is she a qualified mother , but also a good tutor in my life. She always tells us to be a uesful person to society in the future. What a good piece of advice it is ! I 'll keep it in my mind forever.
Such is my mother, ordinary but great.
整篇文章中心明确，语义比较通顺，但是通篇最大的一个问题就是标点符号有点乱，很多都是逗号而没有句号。还有时态上注意第三人称单数的正确运用。具体见上。