作业帮英语作文高手来看下啊、看看这作文能拿几分＼求速度啊.
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英语作文高手来看下啊、看看这作文能拿几分＼求速度啊.
每个人都有自己最喜欢的礼物,请你根据下列信息及要求,以“My favorite birthday present”为题,写一篇英语短文．
你最喜欢什么的礼物是什么?什么时候.什么人赠送给你?你为什么喜欢它?
要求：词数70个单词左右,句首已经提供.
My favorite biethday present
evetyone has his/her favorite present.My favorite birthday
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present is a dog.On my tenth birthday,my father sent him to me.When
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I saw him,I was very happy.Because this present is very special.The dog is black.He is samll and he has two big ears and two black eyes.He is very beautiful,isn't he?I love him very much.Because I like dogs and he can play with me when I feel bored.He always makes me laugh.When I watch TV on the sofa,he sits down on the floor.I usuaslly sleep with him ,too.
He is my good friend.
有划线的是已经提供的部分．
额、 开头哪个单词是everyone
这个是初2的写的.
满粉10
he sits down on the floor 这句后面还有一句:He also watches TV .
每个人都有自己最喜欢的礼物,请你根据下列信息及要求,以“My favorite birthday present”为题,写一篇英语短文．
你最喜欢什么的礼物是什么?什么时候.什么人赠送给你?你为什么喜欢它?
要求：词数70个单词左右,句首已经提供.
My favorite biethday present
evetyone has his/her favorite present.My favorite birthday
----------------------------------------------------------
present is a dog.On my tenth birthday,my father sent him to me.When
----------
I saw him,I was very happy.Because this present is very special.The dog is black.He is samll and he has two big ears and two black eyes.He is very beautiful,isn't he?I love him very much.Because I like dogs and he can play with me when I feel bored.He always makes me laugh.When I watch TV on the sofa,he sits down on the floor.I usuaslly sleep with him ,too.
He is my good friend.
有划线的是已经提供的部分．
额、 开头哪个单词是everyone
这个是初2的写的.
满粉10
he sits down on the floor 这句后面还有一句:He also watches TV .
5,给个很谦虚的分数,说实在的,句子还有很大提升空间,还可以润色一下,用词还要斟酌,代词,复句,并列句,注意下