作业帮帮忙看看作文哪些地方错误
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帮忙看看作文哪些地方错误
Safety is very important to everyone.First,I advise Middle school students and pupils follow the traffic rules and don't run the red light.Because every year have many people are killed in the traffic accident.Second,don't eat junk food,it is bad for our bodies.If you eat junk food too much,maybe you will fall ill.In order to your health,you\d better eat healthy food.Third,I think students should do exercise every day,But be careful not to hurt yourself.
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Safety is very important to everyone.First,I advise Middle school students and pupils follow the traffic rules and don't run the red light.Because every year have many people are killed in the traffic accident.Second,don't eat junk food,it is bad for our bodies.If you eat junk food too much,maybe you will fall ill.In order to your health,you\d better eat healthy food.Third,I think students should do exercise every day,But be careful not to hurt yourself.
顺便求结尾。不知道怎么结尾好
第二局可改成don't go across the road when the traffic light turn red