作业帮请问我这作文如何修改会更好些呢?
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请问我这作文如何修改会更好些呢?
(3) Finally,every view in London is beautiful.There are more than 200 parks in London.In winter,white snow,natural forests,different kinds of hills and clear rivers are enough to make a picture for London.If you live at Proudfoot in London; you will find a park near here.There is a wooden bridge across the river where has many pairs of ducks are swimming.All in all,London is a great place,and everything in London welcomes you.
(3) Finally,every view in London is beautiful.There are more than 200 parks in London.In winter,white snow,natural forests,different kinds of hills and clear rivers are enough to make a picture for London.If you live at Proudfoot in London; you will find a park near here.There is a wooden bridge across the river where has many pairs of ducks are swimming.All in all,London is a great place,and everything in London welcomes you.
不修改就好了OK
请问我这作文如何修改会更好些呢?
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