作业帮英语高手帮忙改改这句话
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英语高手帮忙改改这句话
注意：下面的句子中 this指的是前面的一句话（省去了没写）,
if.之后的是自己的感想.请帮忙修改感想部分,后面的两个句子中的内容都是递进的,怎么说能够舒畅、简洁些?请高手赐教.
".This saying enlightened me.If I could play a positive role in credit construction of a corporation,the cell of economy,then the market fairness and efficiency could be enhanced.Numerous problems in realty could be solved or have a solid base to be solved,thenpeople will get a better life.“
注意：下面的句子中 this指的是前面的一句话（省去了没写）,
if.之后的是自己的感想.请帮忙修改感想部分,后面的两个句子中的内容都是递进的,怎么说能够舒畅、简洁些?请高手赐教.
".This saying enlightened me.If I could play a positive role in credit construction of a corporation,the cell of economy,then the market fairness and efficiency could be enhanced.Numerous problems in realty could be solved or have a solid base to be solved,thenpeople will get a better life.“
This saying enlightened me. If I could play a positive role in credit construction of a corporation,which is the cell of economy, then the fairness and efficiency of market could benhanced. And numerous problems in realty could be solved or well prepared to be solved, then people would get a better life.
再问： 读起来还是觉得有点儿长啊, 有更好的表达吗？
再答： If I could play a positive role in credit construction of a corporation, the fairness and efficiency of market could benhanced, numerous problems in realty could be solved as well, then people would get a better life.
再问： 读起来还是觉得有点儿长啊, 有更好的表达吗？
再答： If I could play a positive role in credit construction of a corporation, the fairness and efficiency of market could benhanced, numerous problems in realty could be solved as well, then people would get a better life.