英语翻译有没有很大的错误?一般英国人能看懂吗,不强求太对!是全文错还是段落错?无聊人士不要回答.——Juliet sta

英语翻译
有没有很大的错误?一般英国人能看懂吗,不强求太对!是全文错还是段落错?无聊人士不要回答.
——Juliet stands at the balcony ,Romeo stands behind.
R:oh,Juliet,your eyes are so clear,your hair is beautiful,you see,that her hands hold her face definitly like a picture,I hope I were the right hannds.
R:oh,Juliet,I love you so much,you are my angel.
J:Why it is you,R,abandon your name and all your belongings.Stay with me forever!
J:R,I love you,let's get together forever,I hope you were by my side at the moment!
——Remeo runs out
R:Juliet,I see you,How grace you are!
J:How can you be here
R:I am here for you.I am dying for seeing you,I miss you so much.
J:Oh,what nice voice,you black hair.it is really you?
J:How did you get here?How did you manage to climb over the high wall?
R:The wings of love brought me to your side,nothing could stop me.
J:Hey,lower your voice.
R:Never mind,I could die for you as long as I could see you.
J:Do you really love me?Please leave here as soon as possible,it would be messed if some one sees you!
R:J,I love you with my whole heart like the moon in the sky,I swear!
Never swear,the moon changes every month.(或翻译为：Never swear,the moon is different form what it was very day.)
R:I really love you ,my dear,my love is as deep as the ocean!
J:Romeo
-Juliet's mother calls her.
J:R ,I get to go.
-Juliet turns back again
J:R,we will meet again.
R:Ok ,Juliet,all my heart and sould is for you!
J:When should we meet next time?
R:Tomorrow,ok?
J:As for me ,one day looks like a centry .
R:Me too.
J:Good night,I get to go.
R:Good night.
-juliet在阳台上,romeo在下面.
R:juliet,你的眼睛,那么清澈,你的头发,如此美丽,你看,她的双手托着脸简直像一幅画,我真希望我只那只支撑着她的脸的手.
R：juliet,我是那么的爱你,你就是我的天使.
R：她讲话了!
J：为什么是你?R,抛弃你的名字,抛弃你的一切,永远跟我在一起!
J：R,我爱你,让我们永远在一起吧,我多希望此刻你在我身边!
-Remeo跑出来了.
R：juliet,我看见你了,你那么美丽的身影..
J：你怎么会出现在这里?
R：我是为你来到这里的,我好想见你,我思想你!
J：如此精致的声音,你那黑色的头发.真的是你吗?
R：是我!
J：你是怎么来到这里的,墙那么高,你怎么越过来的?
R：因为爱的翅膀,带我飞到你身边,没有什么能阻止我.
J：嘘,小声点.
R：没关系,为了你死我也愿意,只要能见你到.
J：你是真的爱我吗,你快回去吧,万一被人看到就遭了!
R：J,我是真心爱你的,就像天上的月亮,我发誓!
J：月亮每个月就会换一次样子呢,别发誓.
R：我是真的爱你,我的爱像海一样深,
J：Romeo..
-Juliet的妈妈叫了她
J：R,我要走了...
-Juliet走了又回头
J：R,我们还会再见的!
R：好的,我的灵魂为你而生!
J:我们下次什么时候能再见?
R：明天吧.
J:对我来说,一天就像一个世纪..R.
R：我也是
J：晚安,我要走了..
R：晚安..

Juliet stands at the balcony ,Romeo stands behind.把 behind 改为below
it is really you?改为 is this really you?
世纪写错了,century
其他的差不多