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请大家帮我看看这篇英文作文里面有没有错误
如题.有的话麻烦写一下应该如何改正
Kevin Garnett id my favourite man.He is very handsome and sexy.He's from the US.He is a basketball player from Boston Celtics.
I love him very much because he wroks very hard.No matter how difficult,he doesn't have to give up.So at the end of his seccess.He received the coveted championship ring.But now he suffered injuries.（这句话我想表达的意思是：但是现在,他却饱受伤病的困扰）He no longer able to touch rebouds above.But I still support him just like in the past.Because I not only appreciate his game.I appreciate his attitude on everything,serious,persistent and fearless.He taught me the attitude of my life.Of course,he is very handsome.But it's only a small part of all the reasonsfor i love him.
He is my favorite person.I will love him forever.
如题.有的话麻烦写一下应该如何改正
Kevin Garnett id my favourite man.He is very handsome and sexy.He's from the US.He is a basketball player from Boston Celtics.
I love him very much because he wroks very hard.No matter how difficult,he doesn't have to give up.So at the end of his seccess.He received the coveted championship ring.But now he suffered injuries.（这句话我想表达的意思是：但是现在,他却饱受伤病的困扰）He no longer able to touch rebouds above.But I still support him just like in the past.Because I not only appreciate his game.I appreciate his attitude on everything,serious,persistent and fearless.He taught me the attitude of my life.Of course,he is very handsome.But it's only a small part of all the reasonsfor i love him.
He is my favorite person.I will love him forever.
You did a venderful job,just with some little grammar problem.So let me try do some thing for you if you don't mind...
Kevin Garnett is my favourite basketball player.He is very handsome and sexy.He's from the US and plaied basketball for Celtics,Boston
I love him very much because he worked very hard.No matter how difficult,he never gave up.Till the end of his seccess,he got the coveted championship ring.But now he is suffered from injuries.He is no longer able to touch rebouds above.But I still cared about him just like before.Because I am not only appreciate his playing but also his attitude for everything like:serious,persistent and fearless.He taught me how to active during my life.Of course he is very attractive that's only part of all the reasons that I love him.
He is my favorite person.I will love him forever.
Kevin Garnett is my favourite basketball player.He is very handsome and sexy.He's from the US and plaied basketball for Celtics,Boston
I love him very much because he worked very hard.No matter how difficult,he never gave up.Till the end of his seccess,he got the coveted championship ring.But now he is suffered from injuries.He is no longer able to touch rebouds above.But I still cared about him just like before.Because I am not only appreciate his playing but also his attitude for everything like:serious,persistent and fearless.He taught me how to active during my life.Of course he is very attractive that's only part of all the reasons that I love him.
He is my favorite person.I will love him forever.