作业帮我写的英语作文,请好心的高手帮我看一下
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我写的英语作文,请好心的高手帮我看一下
英语不好,东拼西凑的一篇,不要笑话我~
As is vividly depicted in the picture above,a lovely American girl in traditional Chinese costume with a charming smile on her face.There is no doubt that this new dress becomes her very well and has added oriental glamour to her beautiful features.It is obvious that Chinese culture is enjoying a striking popularity among the foreigner.
The nation is the world.As a result of our open-doll policy,more and more foreigners visit China and become interested in our richness and charm national culture .Furthermore,many of them even rooted in China and turns to real "Chinese",they can speak mandarin well,cook Chinese food ,sing Bejing opera and even have KongFu!
There is no reason to make a fuss about this phenomenon.On the one hand,we are living in an age when economic globalization is not only heard over the media,but also seen and felt in the reality of our daily life.International culture exchanges have become more and more frequent,which is inevitably improving our mutual understanding and friendship with other countries.On the other hand,it results from our great achievement during the last two decades,such as the accession to WTO,the successful launching of Chang'e No.1 lunar satellite,especially Beijing's successful hosting of the 2008 Olympic Games and so forth.How can one resist being appealed to such an energetic nation with an increasingly significant status as well as a long and colorful culture?
英语不好,东拼西凑的一篇,不要笑话我~
As is vividly depicted in the picture above,a lovely American girl in traditional Chinese costume with a charming smile on her face.There is no doubt that this new dress becomes her very well and has added oriental glamour to her beautiful features.It is obvious that Chinese culture is enjoying a striking popularity among the foreigner.
The nation is the world.As a result of our open-doll policy,more and more foreigners visit China and become interested in our richness and charm national culture .Furthermore,many of them even rooted in China and turns to real "Chinese",they can speak mandarin well,cook Chinese food ,sing Bejing opera and even have KongFu!
There is no reason to make a fuss about this phenomenon.On the one hand,we are living in an age when economic globalization is not only heard over the media,but also seen and felt in the reality of our daily life.International culture exchanges have become more and more frequent,which is inevitably improving our mutual understanding and friendship with other countries.On the other hand,it results from our great achievement during the last two decades,such as the accession to WTO,the successful launching of Chang'e No.1 lunar satellite,especially Beijing's successful hosting of the 2008 Olympic Games and so forth.How can one resist being appealed to such an energetic nation with an increasingly significant status as well as a long and colorful culture?
你好,字数过多,你在考研吧?总体水平还是中等偏上的.
第一段.1、第一句没有谓语, 2、becomes her very well 你确定有这种用法?如果没有的话,换种说法吧,3、 beautiful features是否换为beauty更好?
第二段.1、第一句我认为有点质疑,有直译之嫌,2、第二排的charm应该用charmful吧?3、 第三排的root和turn最好保持时态的一致性.
第三段.理由阐述了2点,但是字数太多,有刻意追求词藻和字数之嫌,建议增加理由,适当的追求词藻,求精辟.
第一段.1、第一句没有谓语, 2、becomes her very well 你确定有这种用法?如果没有的话,换种说法吧,3、 beautiful features是否换为beauty更好?
第二段.1、第一句我认为有点质疑,有直译之嫌,2、第二排的charm应该用charmful吧?3、 第三排的root和turn最好保持时态的一致性.
第三段.理由阐述了2点,但是字数太多,有刻意追求词藻和字数之嫌,建议增加理由,适当的追求词藻,求精辟.