英语作文高手进,请帮我修改下下面的文章,不是我自己写的,我觉得逻辑结构不是很清晰!Pub Culture

英语作文高手进,请帮我修改下下面的文章,不是我自己写的,我觉得逻辑结构不是很清晰!Pub Culture
There is a long history of several centuries of pubs in the U.K.Along with the progress of the society,the pub culture gradually has become an important part of the essence of UK culture and represented a lifestyle of the British.Just as the writing of Samuel Pepys described,the pub is the heart of England and the beer is its soul.
“Pub” is the shortening of the words “Public House”.Nowadays,the pub is as much a British heritage as are its historic monuments and castles.However,the history of pub’s genesis is labyrinthine.The most reliable idea is that with the arrival of the Romans.When most of Britain was under Roman occupation,they built roads all across the British Isles and the first pubs appeared at strategic points of the road network which served as the resting place for the weary traveler.Because of the important role that it plays as a social actor,the popularity of the English Pub can be easily seen in numbers.There are about 61000 pubs in Great Britain,which are frequently visited by 25 million of loyal customers.
Pubs often have interesting old games that in some way reflect British history,like the Queen’s Arms,the Woolpack,and the Bunch of Grapes’.Groups of friends will gather in the pub for a friendly match.The loser may have to pay for a round.But,in today's modern era,the game of pool is very popular in British pubs.Most pubs provide video games and also host Karaoke nights apart from showing exciting football matches on wide screen television.
A recent innovation in the London Pubs scene is the mushrooming of pubs with a theme.For instance Irish pubs,sports pubs,rock pubs etc.Increasingly,theme pubs based on hobbies are also growing in popularity.
Visitors to Britain may find the best place to sample local culture is in a traditional pub.The trouble is that if you do not follow the local rules,the experience may fall flat.For example,most pubs have no waiters——you have to go to the bar to buy drinks.This may sound inconvenient,but there is a hidden purpose.Pub culture is designed to promote sociability in a society known for its reserve.Standing at the bar for service allows you to chat with others waiting to be served.The bar counter is possibly the only site in the British Isles in which friendly conversation with strangers is considered entirely appropriate and really quite normal behavior.
Amazingly for the British,who love queues,there is no formal line-up——the bar staff are skilled at knowing whose turn it is.What’s more,you should never offer the bar staff a cash gratuity.The correct behavior is to offer them a drink.Pubs pride themselves on their egalitarian atmosphere.A tip in cash would be a reminder of their service role,whereas the offer of a drink is a friendly gesture.
In conclusion,with 4000 years developing,British pubs formed their special culture and spirit.For the visitors,it can be a key tourism asset."If you haven't been to a pub,you haven't been to Britain." It truly is the place to go if you really want to learn about English culture and get to know her people.
请帮我修改下这篇文章，需要逻辑清晰，如果改的不错可以加分！下午要。

我觉得逻辑还好,就是介绍酒吧文化的内容有点长,你是要简化的吗?
再问： 你好，我的题目就是英国酒吧文化，主要是要介绍酒吧文化的，需要500字以上
再答： 嗯，好的，既然是要酒吧文化，那么也要介绍历史的，你等等，我帮你简化一下。 There is a long history of several centuries of pubs in the U.K. Along with the progress of the society, the pub culture gradually has become an important part of the essence of UK culture and represented a lifestyle of the British。 “Pub” is the shortening of the words “Public House”. Nowadays, the pub is as much a British heritage as are its historic monuments and castles.The popularity of the English Pub can be easily seen in numbers. There are about 61000 pubs in Great Britain, which are frequently visited by 25 million of loyal customers. Pubs often have interesting old games that in some way reflect British history, like the Queen’s Arms, the Woolpack, and the Bunch of Grapes’. Visitors to Britain may find the best place to sample local culture is in a traditional pub. The trouble is that if you do not follow the local rules, the experience may fall flat。 The british who love queues, you should never offer the bar staff a cash gratuity,A tip in cash would be a reminder of their service role, whereas the offer of a drink is a friendly gesture. In conclusion, with 4000 years developing, British pubs formed their special culture and spirit。 这样下来就不够500字了，其实逻辑还好，第一段总的介绍英国酒吧文化来源，第二段介绍pub一词来历，后面介绍罗马人的加强说明。第三段是补充说明，第四段写近来酒吧创新后衍生的其他酒吧。第五段写酒吧旅游文化，第六段写酒吧的服务，最后一段是总结了。只是有点长。你可以参考一下，个人观点。