作业帮帮我初中水平的英语作文改一下错
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帮我初中水平的英语作文改一下错
首先再帮我做一道填空,
As is ______(know)to all,the earth is round.
接下来是作文了,只要查一下语法错误即可：
Dear Sir
I'm XXX.And I like the music program very much,especially english songs.I'm busy studying,so I sometimes feel tired,and I always turn on the radio to listen to the program.And I have learnde a lot from the English program.For example,my spoken
English is really good since I started listeningto the program.And I like the music called "Heart String".Because its lyrics are good,and it sounds relaxing.So I like it best.And I have regarded the program as an important part of my life.
yours
XXX
首先再帮我做一道填空,
As is ______(know)to all,the earth is round.
接下来是作文了,只要查一下语法错误即可：
Dear Sir
I'm XXX.And I like the music program very much,especially english songs.I'm busy studying,so I sometimes feel tired,and I always turn on the radio to listen to the program.And I have learnde a lot from the English program.For example,my spoken
English is really good since I started listeningto the program.And I like the music called "Heart String".Because its lyrics are good,and it sounds relaxing.So I like it best.And I have regarded the program as an important part of my life.
yours
XXX
1.known 被动语态 同意
2feel tired 后去掉“,”,然后去掉 i always 不同意
“,”去不去无所谓,把always换调就行了,换成usually..
用alway感情色彩不太对,alway多用于指责他人不对的行为或强调他人的习惯性行为,一般不用于自身
英国人讲究谦虚一点 一般用法不会用这个（我想是这样）
3.learned 改为learnt 晕 写法不同而已,都是learn的过去时
4.my spoken English有这种用法,至于My English spoken 没听过,我中学老师从未说有这个
5.it sounds relaxing改为 it sounds relaxed 同意
realxed是使人放松,relaxing是指物体的
2feel tired 后去掉“,”,然后去掉 i always 不同意
“,”去不去无所谓,把always换调就行了,换成usually..
用alway感情色彩不太对,alway多用于指责他人不对的行为或强调他人的习惯性行为,一般不用于自身
英国人讲究谦虚一点 一般用法不会用这个（我想是这样）
3.learned 改为learnt 晕 写法不同而已,都是learn的过去时
4.my spoken English有这种用法,至于My English spoken 没听过,我中学老师从未说有这个
5.it sounds relaxing改为 it sounds relaxed 同意
realxed是使人放松,relaxing是指物体的