作业帮英语作文 请帮我指出里面的语法错误
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英语作文 请帮我指出里面的语法错误
帮改作文 I think that my childhood birthday has been much more happier than now one .when i was young ,my mother usuually bought a big cake for me .there is sweet cream and delicious on the cake .my grandpa and my grandma cooked for me .my family and i were feel happiness .but,as time goes by .i have grown up already .i have left family for school and the time has been getting less and less at home .so,i have cherished the time with family now .my next birthday will in 2014 years ago and i will may be at the school .i hope that i will see my family the day.i will want to cook for them .the brithday does not need complex .i belive that this brithday will the best in my memory.我认为小时候的生日比现在更快乐.在我小时候我的妈妈总是会在那一天买一个大蛋糕给我.蛋糕上有甜甜的奶油和美味的巧克力.我的爷爷和奶奶会做好吃的饭菜给我.但是,时光飞逝.我长大了,离开了家来到学校,在家里的时间也变得越来越少.所以我现在珍惜和家人在一起的时间.我的下个生日在2014年,那时我可能在学校.我希望在那天我能看到我的家人,做一顿饭给他们.生日不需要复杂,我相信这将是我记忆中最好的生日.
帮改作文 I think that my childhood birthday has been much more happier than now one .when i was young ,my mother usuually bought a big cake for me .there is sweet cream and delicious on the cake .my grandpa and my grandma cooked for me .my family and i were feel happiness .but,as time goes by .i have grown up already .i have left family for school and the time has been getting less and less at home .so,i have cherished the time with family now .my next birthday will in 2014 years ago and i will may be at the school .i hope that i will see my family the day.i will want to cook for them .the brithday does not need complex .i belive that this brithday will the best in my memory.我认为小时候的生日比现在更快乐.在我小时候我的妈妈总是会在那一天买一个大蛋糕给我.蛋糕上有甜甜的奶油和美味的巧克力.我的爷爷和奶奶会做好吃的饭菜给我.但是,时光飞逝.我长大了,离开了家来到学校,在家里的时间也变得越来越少.所以我现在珍惜和家人在一起的时间.我的下个生日在2014年,那时我可能在学校.我希望在那天我能看到我的家人,做一顿饭给他们.生日不需要复杂,我相信这将是我记忆中最好的生日.
1.不能用more happier,是happier.happier本身就是比较级,就不能用more
2.不是 usuually,是usually
3.were feel.要么用were felt 或者felt
4.delicious chocolate .忘记了chocolate
5.has been getting 改为has got
6.will may not.用may be.will 和may不能用在一起
7.brithday,改为birthday
8.capital letter.每开始新的句子,第一个单词的第一个字母要大写,I要大写
2.不是 usuually,是usually
3.were feel.要么用were felt 或者felt
4.delicious chocolate .忘记了chocolate
5.has been getting 改为has got
6.will may not.用may be.will 和may不能用在一起
7.brithday,改为birthday
8.capital letter.每开始新的句子,第一个单词的第一个字母要大写,I要大写
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