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高二英语改错题.麻烦有能力的人帮忙找一下里面的错误 一共十处 .只能今晚.

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高二英语改错题.麻烦有能力的人帮忙找一下里面的错误 一共十处 .只能今晚.
yesterday afternoon a robbery was happened in back in our city .according what some people said ,it was five minutes to 5.00 pm .just after the closing time of the back ,but it was raining heavy.with few cars on the road outside .suddenly ,two young men with mask rushed in and threatened the clerks with guns .then they put a lot of money in their bags ,rushing out and drove away in hurry ,all this lasted only a few minutes ,fortunately ,there was nobody killed or wounded in the robbery .the police are searching for the robbers ,hoping whoever get some information calls him up as soon as possible .
你把bank这个单词打错了,打成了back.
改错:
1.Yesterday afternoon a robbery was happened in bank in our city.bank前应该加the.
2.According what some people said.according后面加to.
3.Just after the closing time of the back after应该改成before.
4.But it was raining heavy.But改成And.
5.But it was raining heavy.heavy改成heavily.
6..yesterday afternoon a robbery was happened in back in our city was去掉
7.two young men with mask mask改成masks.
8.rushing out and drove away in hurry rushing应该改成rushed.
9.rushing out and drove away in hurry hurry前面加个a.
10.hoping whoever get some information calls him up as soon as possible him改成them.