作业帮求大神帮我改改这段英语,
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求大神帮我改改这段英语,
从另一方面来说,石油本身就是一种宝贵的化工原料,可以用来制造塑料、合成橡胶和合成纤维等.把石油作为燃料烧掉了,不但十分可惜,而且还污染了人类赖以生存的环境.解决这个难题的唯一可行办法,就是加紧开发新能源.根据调查显示,汽车所造成的空气污染占整个城市空气污染的60%甚至到90%.不可再生能源的日趋枯竭,城市污染的加重,世界范围内的温室效应,海平面升高等一系列环境问题都给我们人类的持续发展敲响了警钟,促使我们必须寻求一条绿色发展之路,寻找可以代替不可再生能源的新能源（清洁能源）.毫无疑问具有清洁、高效并且取之不尽用之不竭等优点的太阳能被人们列入了第一考虑对象.
On the other hand,the oil itself is a kind of valuable chemicalraw materials,can be used to make plastics,synthetic rubber and syntheticfiber,etc.The oil as fuel is burned,not only great pity,but also pollutesthe environment to the survival of humans.The only feasible way to solve thisdifficult problem,is to intensify the development of new energy.According tothe survey,car air pollution caused by the 60% of air pollution in the cityand even to 90%.Non-renewable energy depleted,city pollution is aggravating,the world within the scope of the greenhouse effect,rising sea levels and aseries of environmental problems is the sustainable development of human beingsis a wake-up call to us,we must seek a path of green development,seek newenergy can replace non-renewable energy (clean).There is no doubt that isclean,efficient and inexhaustible advantages of solar energy has been listedas the first consideration.
从另一方面来说,石油本身就是一种宝贵的化工原料,可以用来制造塑料、合成橡胶和合成纤维等.把石油作为燃料烧掉了,不但十分可惜,而且还污染了人类赖以生存的环境.解决这个难题的唯一可行办法,就是加紧开发新能源.根据调查显示,汽车所造成的空气污染占整个城市空气污染的60%甚至到90%.不可再生能源的日趋枯竭,城市污染的加重,世界范围内的温室效应,海平面升高等一系列环境问题都给我们人类的持续发展敲响了警钟,促使我们必须寻求一条绿色发展之路,寻找可以代替不可再生能源的新能源（清洁能源）.毫无疑问具有清洁、高效并且取之不尽用之不竭等优点的太阳能被人们列入了第一考虑对象.
On the other hand,the oil itself is a kind of valuable chemicalraw materials,can be used to make plastics,synthetic rubber and syntheticfiber,etc.The oil as fuel is burned,not only great pity,but also pollutesthe environment to the survival of humans.The only feasible way to solve thisdifficult problem,is to intensify the development of new energy.According tothe survey,car air pollution caused by the 60% of air pollution in the cityand even to 90%.Non-renewable energy depleted,city pollution is aggravating,the world within the scope of the greenhouse effect,rising sea levels and aseries of environmental problems is the sustainable development of human beingsis a wake-up call to us,we must seek a path of green development,seek newenergy can replace non-renewable energy (clean).There is no doubt that isclean,efficient and inexhaustible advantages of solar energy has been listedas the first consideration.
On the other hand,the oil itself is a valuable chemical raw material,can be used to make plastics,synthetic rubber and synthetic fiber etc..The oil as fuel is burned,not only a great pity,but also pollutes the environment for human survival.The only feasible way to solve this problem,is to step up the development of new energy.According to the survey,the air pollution caused by cars accounted for the entire city air pollution 60% or even to 90%.Increasing depletion of non renewable energy sources,aggravate the city pollution,the greenhouse effect in the world,the sea level rise higher a series of environmental problems are to our sustainable development of mankind has sounded the alarm,to which we must seek a green development path,look for new energy to replace non renewable energy (clean).There is no doubt has a clean,efficient and inexhaustible be inexhaustible solar energy has been included in the advantages of first consideration.