作业帮英语作文中语法错误的、求大神帮忙改改
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英语作文中语法错误的、求大神帮忙改改
Wild animals Animals are ou friends,but many people kill "friends" for their fur and meat.The people have killed a lot of wild animals.So many kinds of animals are in danger.Meanwhile,the green house effect makes temperature rise,therefore,the iceberg is melting and it will make some animals like polar bears have fewer and fewer places to live.Now,just imagine,what will happen if there aren't animals?The world will happen achain of events ,we people won't have meat to eat and we ill die!Therefore,we shoule protect wildlife animals.I think First,every country's government should make the nature reserves bigger and bigger.Then,they should make the wildlife animals have enough food to eat.But there is still a long wall to make this two points come true.
Wild animals Animals are ou friends,but many people kill "friends" for their fur and meat.The people have killed a lot of wild animals.So many kinds of animals are in danger.Meanwhile,the green house effect makes temperature rise,therefore,the iceberg is melting and it will make some animals like polar bears have fewer and fewer places to live.Now,just imagine,what will happen if there aren't animals?The world will happen achain of events ,we people won't have meat to eat and we ill die!Therefore,we shoule protect wildlife animals.I think First,every country's government should make the nature reserves bigger and bigger.Then,they should make the wildlife animals have enough food to eat.But there is still a long wall to make this two points come true.
Wild animals
Animals are our friends, but many people kill "friends" for their fur and meat. The people have killed a lot of wild animals. So many kinds of animals are in danger. Meanwhile, the green house effect makes temperature rise, therefore, the iceberg is melting and it will make some animals like polar bears have fewer and fewer places to live. Now, just imagine, what will happen if there aren't animals? The world will happen a chain of events, we people won't have meat to eat and we ill die! Therefore, we should protect wildlife animals. I think First, every country's government should make the nature reserves bigger and bigger. Then, they should make the wildlife animals have enough food to eat. But there is still a long wall to make this two points come true.
你的观点还是很好的.打字上可能有些错误, 我这里给你改过来了.然后,我给你修改了大部分句子,如下：
The people have killed a lot of wild animals. So many kinds of animals are in danger.
改为：These people have killed so many wild animals that some species are in danger of extinction.
Meanwhile, the green house effect makes temperature rise, therefore, the iceberg is melting and it will make some animals like polar bears have fewer and fewer places to live.
改为：Meanwhile, the greenhouse effect leads to temperature rise, which results in iceberg getting melted and animals like polar bears will lose their habitats.
The world will happen a chain of events ,we people won't have meat to eat and we ill die!
改为： A chain of events will happen in the world. We people won’t have meat to eat and we will get ill and may even die in the end!
But there is still a long wall to make this two points come true.
改为：But there is still a long way to go before we can make these two points come true.
请采纳
Animals are our friends, but many people kill "friends" for their fur and meat. The people have killed a lot of wild animals. So many kinds of animals are in danger. Meanwhile, the green house effect makes temperature rise, therefore, the iceberg is melting and it will make some animals like polar bears have fewer and fewer places to live. Now, just imagine, what will happen if there aren't animals? The world will happen a chain of events, we people won't have meat to eat and we ill die! Therefore, we should protect wildlife animals. I think First, every country's government should make the nature reserves bigger and bigger. Then, they should make the wildlife animals have enough food to eat. But there is still a long wall to make this two points come true.
你的观点还是很好的.打字上可能有些错误, 我这里给你改过来了.然后,我给你修改了大部分句子,如下：
The people have killed a lot of wild animals. So many kinds of animals are in danger.
改为：These people have killed so many wild animals that some species are in danger of extinction.
Meanwhile, the green house effect makes temperature rise, therefore, the iceberg is melting and it will make some animals like polar bears have fewer and fewer places to live.
改为：Meanwhile, the greenhouse effect leads to temperature rise, which results in iceberg getting melted and animals like polar bears will lose their habitats.
The world will happen a chain of events ,we people won't have meat to eat and we ill die!
改为： A chain of events will happen in the world. We people won’t have meat to eat and we will get ill and may even die in the end!
But there is still a long wall to make this two points come true.
改为：But there is still a long way to go before we can make these two points come true.
请采纳