高一英语短文改错.T 这是我改的：During the summer holiday this year,I thoug

高一英语短文改错.T
这是我改的：
During the summer holiday this year,I thought I should do anything(something） meaningful instead of staying at home,so I have（had） got a job at a（去掉a） KFC fast food restaurant,worked there as a cleaner.I worked seven hours a day for there weeks.
The job was hard and bored and seemed endless,which（it） made me so tired that I nearly gave it in half（加a） way,but i stuck to it because my strong determination.Every day I started off for （for去掉）work early in the morning and got home lately（late） in the evening.Finally I （加had）finished the job before the new term begins.
Now,I understand that（what） labor means.I think it is （加a）really successful experience.
我是这样想的：（把错掉的我解释一下为什么我改成这样了哈T T)①把have改成had,因为过去就已经得到了在KFC的工作,所以用过去完成时.②去掉a,因为KFC fast food restaurant 是一个指定的地点,好像train station,所以不用a.③把which改成it,因为我觉得后面是it made me so tired that i ……不是一个固定的句型吗?④在half后面加a,不是有half a hour么?⑤去掉of,start off for work ,off已经是一个介词了,干吗还加介词呢?start off work 就可以了啊?⑥Finally I(加had）finished the job,不是过去已经完成工作么?
这是正确答案：
During the summer holiday this year,I thought I should do anything(something） meaningful instead of staying at home,so I have（去掉have） got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant,worked（working） there as a cleaner.I worked seven hours a day for there weeks.
The job was hard and bored（boring） and seemed endless,which made me so tired that I nearly gave it in（up） half way,but i stuck to it because（加of） my strong determination.Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got home lately（late） in the evening.Finally I finished the job before the new term begins（began）.
Now,I understand that（what） labor means.I think it is （加a）really successful experience.

①⑥ 如果像LZ一样改的话 就成了过去完成时
过去完成时专门表示 过去的过去 即强调在过去的某一事件之前完成 答案正确

②表单数 一个 就算不+a 也要加the LZ记错了

③这是一个定语从句 用which来指代it 具体说来比较麻烦 最好参考语法书
如果像LZ一样改的话 中间标点应该用逗号 表示两个句子


④half 是和way一起的 表示半途而废

⑤off 是副词 连在一起表示早起