作业帮请各位英语大虾进来帮我看看.
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请各位英语大虾进来帮我看看.
English teachers should make full use of network resources service for English teaching,but also participate actively in the construction of network resources and contribute their English teaching experience and achievements by using of network technology.Teachers establish their own network platform,so that it will become a part of network resources,so they can exchange and sharing it with majority of other teachers.
On the other hand,Teachers encourage students to learn how to make reasonable choice and effective use of network resources,thereby increasing and rich their learning experience .Teachers should teach students resisting the impact of adverse information.
In short,Teachers provide the necessary basic knowledge,basic skills and a good emotional attitude and values for students of life-long education by the integration of the network and the English courses and the development of the new English courses.With the core of innovative spirit and practical ability,the abilities of students which are to gathering information,acquiring new knowledge independently,analyzing and solving problems,exchanging and cooperating are strengthened.
之前把提问发错地方了.等了一天都没人.仅有的一点积分也不多了.请英语好手进来帮下忙.万分感激!
由于我之前没有讲清楚，让各位好心帮忙的人白忙活了，非常对不住。
我需要改下这段英语。因为里面句子非常不通顺。仍然需要用英语回复。
English teachers should make full use of network resources service for English teaching,but also participate actively in the construction of network resources and contribute their English teaching experience and achievements by using of network technology.Teachers establish their own network platform,so that it will become a part of network resources,so they can exchange and sharing it with majority of other teachers.
On the other hand,Teachers encourage students to learn how to make reasonable choice and effective use of network resources,thereby increasing and rich their learning experience .Teachers should teach students resisting the impact of adverse information.
In short,Teachers provide the necessary basic knowledge,basic skills and a good emotional attitude and values for students of life-long education by the integration of the network and the English courses and the development of the new English courses.With the core of innovative spirit and practical ability,the abilities of students which are to gathering information,acquiring new knowledge independently,analyzing and solving problems,exchanging and cooperating are strengthened.
之前把提问发错地方了.等了一天都没人.仅有的一点积分也不多了.请英语好手进来帮下忙.万分感激!
由于我之前没有讲清楚，让各位好心帮忙的人白忙活了，非常对不住。
我需要改下这段英语。因为里面句子非常不通顺。仍然需要用英语回复。
English teachers should (not only) make full use of network resources for (their) English teaching,but also participate actively in the construction of network resources and contribute their English teaching experience and achievements by using *(of) network technology.
加上not only与but also 对应
service 罗嗦
去掉of因为using是及物动词
Teachers establish their own network platform,so that it will become a part of network resources,so they can exchange and sharing it with majority of other teachers.
改成：Through establishing their own network platform,teachers can exchange information with other teachers.
原句太罗嗦
On the other hand,Teachers （should）encourage (their) students to (learn how to) make reasonable choice and effective use of network resources,thereby increasing and rich their learning experience.
加个should
their students
to make reasonable...就可以了
thereby该改成hence
rich该改成enrich
Teachers should teach students resisting the impact of adverse information.
teach ...to ...
In short,Teachers provide (their students with) the basic knowledge,skills and a attitude by .
加their students with,这样就是provide somebody with something或provide something to somebody
basic和necessary重复了,又什么不是necessary呢?所以去掉一个necessary,同时也去掉一个重复的basic
value也意思不明,其实就是说的attitude
good attitude是什么attitude?改为positive
这句意思没表达好,改为by developing new English courses through the integration of the network with the English courses
With the core of innovative spirit and practical ability,the abilities of students which are to gathering information,acquiring new knowledge independently,analyzing and solving problems,exchanging and cooperating are strengthened.
改为with innovative spirit and practical ability at the core,the students' abilities of gathering information,acquiring new knowledge independently,analyzing and solving problems,exchanging and cooperating are strengthened.
全文改后是这样的：
English teachers should not only make full use of network resources for their English teaching,but also participate actively in the construction of network resources and contribute their English teaching experience and achievements by using network technology.Through establishing their own network platform,teachers can exchange information with other teachers.
On the other hand,Teachers should encourage their students to make reasonable choice and effective use of network resources,hence increasing and enriching their learning experience.Teachers should teach their students to resist the impact of adverse information.
In short,Teachers provide their students with the basic knowledge,skills and a positive attitude by developing new English courses through the integration of the network with the English courses.
With innovative spirit and practical abilities at the core,the students' abilities of gathering information,acquiring new knowledge independently,analyzing and solving problems,exchanging and cooperating are strengthened.
很高兴帮助你改这篇短文,如果有问题我们继续讨论.
加上not only与but also 对应
service 罗嗦
去掉of因为using是及物动词
Teachers establish their own network platform,so that it will become a part of network resources,so they can exchange and sharing it with majority of other teachers.
改成：Through establishing their own network platform,teachers can exchange information with other teachers.
原句太罗嗦
On the other hand,Teachers （should）encourage (their) students to (learn how to) make reasonable choice and effective use of network resources,thereby increasing and rich their learning experience.
加个should
their students
to make reasonable...就可以了
thereby该改成hence
rich该改成enrich
Teachers should teach students resisting the impact of adverse information.
teach ...to ...
In short,Teachers provide (their students with) the basic knowledge,skills and a attitude by .
加their students with,这样就是provide somebody with something或provide something to somebody
basic和necessary重复了,又什么不是necessary呢?所以去掉一个necessary,同时也去掉一个重复的basic
value也意思不明,其实就是说的attitude
good attitude是什么attitude?改为positive
这句意思没表达好,改为by developing new English courses through the integration of the network with the English courses
With the core of innovative spirit and practical ability,the abilities of students which are to gathering information,acquiring new knowledge independently,analyzing and solving problems,exchanging and cooperating are strengthened.
改为with innovative spirit and practical ability at the core,the students' abilities of gathering information,acquiring new knowledge independently,analyzing and solving problems,exchanging and cooperating are strengthened.
全文改后是这样的：
English teachers should not only make full use of network resources for their English teaching,but also participate actively in the construction of network resources and contribute their English teaching experience and achievements by using network technology.Through establishing their own network platform,teachers can exchange information with other teachers.
On the other hand,Teachers should encourage their students to make reasonable choice and effective use of network resources,hence increasing and enriching their learning experience.Teachers should teach their students to resist the impact of adverse information.
In short,Teachers provide their students with the basic knowledge,skills and a positive attitude by developing new English courses through the integration of the network with the English courses.
With innovative spirit and practical abilities at the core,the students' abilities of gathering information,acquiring new knowledge independently,analyzing and solving problems,exchanging and cooperating are strengthened.
很高兴帮助你改这篇短文,如果有问题我们继续讨论.