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雅思大作文几个句子帮忙看看有没有问题,如果有更好的表达方法呈现就更好了!(求专业的看看)

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雅思大作文几个句子帮忙看看有没有问题,如果有更好的表达方法呈现就更好了!(求专业的看看)
1 It is quiet absurd that if an university receive equal male and female students in every subject from my perspective.
2 In conclusion, it is unnecessary for university to accept equal number of male and female students in every subject in that it wiil play a toll in students' development, restrict the freedom of students and trigger the side effect among students.
from my perspective, it is quite absurd that an university receives male and female students in every subject in an equal way. 注意quite拼写 语法方面去掉if 注意单数第三人称 按照我这样表达
In conclusion, it is unnecessary for a university to accept equal number of male and female students in every subject in that it wiil play a toll in students' development, restricting the freedom of students and triggering the side effect among students. 这里注意大学前加a 还有非谓语动词那里加Ing 按我这样表达
求采纳 我英语专业八级的 谢谢