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请求修改语法错误,Dear Sir or Madam,As a warm-hearted and attentivene

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请求修改语法错误,
Dear Sir or Madam,
As a warm-hearted and attentiveness-full student who is in college for studying English.I have spent a lot of time caring about the development of learning English well.So that I write this letter to display some of my recommendations with regard to the books which I want to buy as follows.
Firstly,the book which I choose should have a good quality.Secondly,the method of payment only is cash and card.Last but not the lest,pack them with a strong shell in case having harm to book.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
warm-hearted and attentiveness用的很奇怪 不太顺
一个是adjective 一个是名词 最好都用一样的词性 不然老外感觉很wired 不过还是能通
So that I write this letter to display some of my recommendations with regard to the books which I want to buy as follows.
这句话实在是.不太顺 不过应该可以
但是你可能有误区some of my recommendations是我推荐中的一些
而不是一些我的推荐的意思
我猜测你需要买一些你自己推荐的书籍吧
display这个词通常用在显示器 或者 招牌 车标能看的东西
还有follows请问你这个是第三人称动词 还是名词的复数 一般用作名词 直接写the following就可以
only虽然是只是的意思但是不能用and 因为是two ways to pay
你可以改成only can be cash or card 这样才是2选1
Last but not the lest,pack them with a strong shell in case having harm to book.
我也不知道你要表达什么了 不过大概猜想你想说用一个箱子保护书籍不被损坏吧
lastly,please pack them with plastic shell in a strong chest in order to avoid any intangible damage cause