短文改错 How is everything?I’m writing to tell you about the rac

短文改错
How is everything?I’m writing to tell you about the race be held next Tuesday.You are one of the ten runner in your class,and you need to be at the school gate by 1:30 pm this day.The race began at 1:40.All racers will start on the gate.Then turn right and run along Zhongshan Road till you see the traffic lights,there you’ll turn right again and keep running along Guang’an Street till you will come to the Post Office.
There turn right,go on the bank or the river,crossing the bridge and take a left turn.Finally,they are to reach the finish line.By the way,if you want much information,please let me know.
Every morning Steve went to work by train.As he has a long trip,he always buys newspaper.It helps make the time passing more quickly.One Tuesday morning,he turned over the sports page.He wanted to reads the report about an important football match the night before.The report was so interesting that he forgot to get off at his station.He did not know it unless he saw the sea.He got on at the next station,and had to wait a long time for a train to go back.It was no doubt that he arrived late at the office.His boss was angry when Steve told to him why he was late .”Work is very important than football ” he shouted.
When you think you’re sick,if you believe your doctor,and id he tell you that you are going feel better,you probably will.Here is an is an example.Mrs Green was unable to go to sleep at night and tiring during the day.So she went to see her doctor she had been known for years.The doctor listened to her and gave her a very carefully examination.Then he said to her,“There is noting serious,but I understand you don’t feel best.I’m going to give you some pills; You should take one after dinner and one before go to bed tonight.Call me tomorrow and tell me what you feel.” The next day,Mrs Green telephone,saying,“Doctor,I have the first good night’s sleep in two months last night.” The doctor said,“It’s very good medicine.Just keep on taking them for a week.” But in fact,the doctor just gave him some vitamin pills.
Nowadays,some students would not like to living in a dorm.Instead,they rented houses outside the school.There are advantages for all.Living in a dorm can increase friendship and cooperation among classmates,but of course it is safe.A dorm is more like a society,where enables students to learn to get along with the each other,thus preparing for the society,where enables students to learn to live in alone,it’s better for your studies as you can feel freely in your own room without interrupted by others.As a resylt,you will have more time and can devote yourself to stydying whole-hearted.But there may appear a few safety problem as you live outside the school.Anyhow as a student,I prefer living in a dorm.
以上 是每段一篇 每篇10个错误的来着

你这么发 行都乱了 本来应该每段十行的吧 而且看起来也比较乱 总得数行数
第一个
1.第一行 race后加一个to
2.第二行 runner--runners
3.第三行
4.第四行 you will后面的will去掉
5.第五行 to去掉
6.第六行 on改成along
7.第七行 much改成more
第二个
1.第一行
2.第二行 passing改成pass
3.第三行 reads改成read
4.第四行 unless改成until
5.第五行 on改成off a改成the
6.第六行 told to的to去掉 very改成more
7.第七行

第三个

1.第一行 tell改成tells
2.第二行 go改成get
3.第三行 tiring改成tired had been的been去掉
4.第四行 carefully改成careful （这行nothing你打错了）
5.第五行 best改成well
6.第六行 go改成going
7.第七行 telephone改成telephoned in可以改成within
8.最后一行 him改成her （女的）

第四个

1.第一行 living改成live
2.第二行
3.第三行 but改成and
4.第四行 each other前面的the去掉
5.第五行 in可以去掉或者第四行where改成which freely改成free without后面加个being
6.第六行（result你打错了）
7.第七行 as可以改成if
看了一遍 大体上找出来这些 话说10个改错的话 好像是有小于等于个正确的吧（多年前的时候的rule）~~