作业帮帮忙修改下香港大学入学申请的自我简介
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帮忙修改下香港大学入学申请的自我简介
I have been always dreaming of going to the University of Hong Kong since I was 15 when I just finished my visit to HKU.What HKU appeals to me most is its academic atmosphere of freedomand the close connection with the whole globe.As the poem written by Petőfi goes,” Both can be given up for freedom.” In my opinion,freedom is what a citizen of a civilized country have to fight for with his life.And I think one with a great ambition must base his aspiration on the great sight.Having considered all those above,the University of Hong Kong is the best choice with its rich history and culture and lofty reputation.
As for major,I choose BSC(AC) as my first choice and BECON/BFIN/BECON&FIN as my second choice.At present,our country is in the state of the beginning of the building of the financial market.There is also a lack of the person of the financial talent in our country for the coming decades.So I think such a choice would guarantee good quality graduate work satisfying my expect of the future.Compared with most western countries ,China is still not so mature in the financial field.My strong will to undertake the responsibility to help develope our country in her undeveloped fields makes up a part of the driving force for me to make such a choice as well.
Concerning about future,to achieve my goals of life and be a better person,I’m looking forward to becoming a member of the University of Hong Kong eagerly.
主要是语法方面,我高中英语学的并不很好,很多词组和介词用法都不规范.六月十五日前交表,现在急用.
I have been always dreaming of going to the University of Hong Kong since I was 15 when I just finished my visit to HKU.What HKU appeals to me most is its academic atmosphere of freedomand the close connection with the whole globe.As the poem written by Petőfi goes,” Both can be given up for freedom.” In my opinion,freedom is what a citizen of a civilized country have to fight for with his life.And I think one with a great ambition must base his aspiration on the great sight.Having considered all those above,the University of Hong Kong is the best choice with its rich history and culture and lofty reputation.
As for major,I choose BSC(AC) as my first choice and BECON/BFIN/BECON&FIN as my second choice.At present,our country is in the state of the beginning of the building of the financial market.There is also a lack of the person of the financial talent in our country for the coming decades.So I think such a choice would guarantee good quality graduate work satisfying my expect of the future.Compared with most western countries ,China is still not so mature in the financial field.My strong will to undertake the responsibility to help develope our country in her undeveloped fields makes up a part of the driving force for me to make such a choice as well.
Concerning about future,to achieve my goals of life and be a better person,I’m looking forward to becoming a member of the University of Hong Kong eagerly.
主要是语法方面,我高中英语学的并不很好,很多词组和介词用法都不规范.六月十五日前交表,现在急用.
I have been dreaming of going to the University of Hong Kong since I was 15 when I finished my visit to HKU.What HKU appeals to me most is its academic atmosphere of freedomand and the close connection with the whole globe.As the poem written by Petőfi goes,” Both can be given up for freedom.” In my opinion,freedom is what a citizen of a civilized country have to fight for through all his life.And I think the one who is with a great ambition must base his aspiration on a great sight.Having considered all those above,the University of Hong Kong is the best choice for its rich history,culture and lofty reputation.
As for the major,I would like to choose BSC(AC) as my first choice and BECON/BFIN/BECON&FIN as the second.At present,our country is in the state of the beginning of the establishing a financial market.There is also a lack of the talented person of finance in our country for the coming decades.So I think such a choice would guarantee good quality work after graduation which could satisfy my expectation of the future.Compared with most western countries ,China is still not that mature in the financial field.My strong will of undertaking the responsibility to help develope our country in her undeveloped fields consists a part of the motivation for me to make such a choice as well.
Concerning about the future,to achieve my goals of life and to be a better person,I’m looking forward to being admitted by the University of Hong Kong eagerly.
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于是稍稍改了微小的几处
希望可以有参考帮助……
As for the major,I would like to choose BSC(AC) as my first choice and BECON/BFIN/BECON&FIN as the second.At present,our country is in the state of the beginning of the establishing a financial market.There is also a lack of the talented person of finance in our country for the coming decades.So I think such a choice would guarantee good quality work after graduation which could satisfy my expectation of the future.Compared with most western countries ,China is still not that mature in the financial field.My strong will of undertaking the responsibility to help develope our country in her undeveloped fields consists a part of the motivation for me to make such a choice as well.
Concerning about the future,to achieve my goals of life and to be a better person,I’m looking forward to being admitted by the University of Hong Kong eagerly.
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于是稍稍改了微小的几处
希望可以有参考帮助……