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correct mistakes
i want to go to bed after lunch .but i must write a diary .because it is necessary to do myhomework .i thought doing well in english is too hard,as my basis very poor .
i recognized a man whose name is nanguo .he run a small a factary which produce clothing in the city of tazhou .on internet .,we chatted about jib,reading ,plan tied ,he invited me to spend weeked ,but i must think of this thing .,i am waiting for him on OICQ but he couldnt come from then ,i dont what he was doing ,
这是我的看法,有些地方不连贯,我改了一下,希望你能看明白.Good luck!
I want to go to bed after my lunch.But I must write a diary first because it is part of my homework.I think it is hard to do well in english as my basis of English very poor .
I know a man whose name is Nanguo.He runs a small a clothing-factory in the city of Tazhou.We chatted about job,reading and plan tied online.He invited me to spend this weekend with him ,but i should think of this thing before I give him my answer.But he is like disappeared since then as I couldn't see him on OICQ.I don't know what happen to him.