作业帮老师，批一下英语作文
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Dear friends, Welcome to our school,We have many ways to study.For example,You study in groups or you can study by yourself. If you study in groups.You can help each other,listen to others to learn something,work together with your classmates and tell others how do you study toget good grades with your classmates. Also,you can study by yourself too.you can make a study plan to study.make good use of your time.Be the owner of the study.you also can get good grades by yourself. welcome to our school and study with us. thank you for listening
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解题过程：
Dear friends,
Welcome to our school, We have many ways to study .For example, we study in groups or we can study by ourselves.
If we study in groups ,we can help each other, listen to others and learn something more , work together with our classmates and tell others how to study to get good grades with our classmates.
（ Also 去掉，与后面的too 重复。） We can study by ourselves too. We can make a study plan to study and make good use of our time .Be the owner of the study, and we can also get good grades through our own efforts.(by ourselves在文中出现次数较多，可以转换一下表达方式) .
Welcome to our school and study with us.
Thank you for listening .
文章结构合理，层次清晰，句间连接成分使用较好, 语言比较流畅。
注意前后人称要一致，避免使用重复的表达。
最终答案：略
解题过程：
Dear friends,
Welcome to our school, We have many ways to study .For example, we study in groups or we can study by ourselves.
If we study in groups ,we can help each other, listen to others and learn something more , work together with our classmates and tell others how to study to get good grades with our classmates.
（ Also 去掉，与后面的too 重复。） We can study by ourselves too. We can make a study plan to study and make good use of our time .Be the owner of the study, and we can also get good grades through our own efforts.(by ourselves在文中出现次数较多，可以转换一下表达方式) .
Welcome to our school and study with us.
Thank you for listening .
文章结构合理，层次清晰，句间连接成分使用较好, 语言比较流畅。
注意前后人称要一致，避免使用重复的表达。
最终答案：略