英语好的进!Pick one of the following topics to write on. 100words

英语好的进!
Pick one of the following topics to write on.
100words
1.Smoking is cool.
2.Pollution is inevitable.
3.Watching television is bad for children.
4.It is better to be a member of a group than to be the leader of a group.
5.Playing a game is fun only when you win.
6.Only people who earn a lot of money are successful.
7.There is nothing that young people can teach older people.
8.Technology has made a world a better place to live.
9.Business should do anything they can to make a profit.
10.A person should never make an important decision alone.
11.The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns.
12.Progress is always good.
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I don't think so.../I agree.

5.Playing a game is fun only when you win.
There are only two consequences of a game: win or lose. Nevertheless, as far as I am concerned, I would like to add one more option that would be the process. I admit the recession which lose a game may bring about is a harsh time to recover, though, more fun can be observed either in the process or after winning. Thus, I would be the last one to uphold the idea that merely during the winning hours can we feel the enjoyment from the game, simply for the precious process at the game and the experience gained from it.
For one thing, the winning time is not the only time we can be happy. The tennis game playing with my friends each week would be a case in point. The game marriages me with my friends every week and constructively furnishes the time for us to get together. I do enjoy the relaxing atmosphere when we playing that most of us would pay no attention to the result of the game but the process of the game. During the game, we usually have conversations about the past week and share the happiness and sorrow with each other. At the same time, we communicate about the skills of the tennis and I invariably get some instructions by my friends who do a better job than me in terms of the tennis. Along with the short period of time I learn a lot, and build my body as well. Both from the mental and physical perspective, I regard the game as a treasure especially the time with friends not the victory of the game.
On the other hand, personally, say, the most wonderful thing is the experience we amassed from the game. Each game would teach us a good lesson without considering whether it is positively or negatively. Even if we lose the game, we learn from it and gradually avert the mistakes previously made. That would be an efficacious avenue to make self-improvement and obtain the enjoyment from the game. And at the present time can you claim that it is more fun just to win a single game? Of course the answer seems to be opposite.
However, some obstinately hold a superficial consciousness of that the fun merely can be existed when you win. Maybe they are belonged to the competitive-minded people who value the outcome more than anything and have the narrow access of touching the feeling of hilarity.
Why those people esteem the time of winning is still beyond me. What I do treasure is how we perform in the game instead of the victory of it. In this sense, playing a game would bring about uncountable fun to me in every aspect.
楼主,这是我自己写的,希望能看得上.