作业帮英语短文,给我看看那里有错误,
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英语短文,给我看看那里有错误,
This song^s singing on stage is a British singer Eric Clapton.I like this song very much.The girst of lyics is about one night a story of babality took place on himeself and his wife.The soft slow melody and moving background music make me feel very comfortable.We can be easy to read out the singer^s love to his wife .I am admired at him very much and I like the song .S I introduced the song to you and I hope you may like it .To the world you may be one person ,but to one person you may be the world.Love exsists in our ordinary action .We don^t need sky-rocking and earth shaking .because we have love .That^s enough.
中间有个词打错了是banality，好像还有别的错误，望指正
一楼那位大哥，哪里错了您告诉我呀==
This song^s singing on stage is a British singer Eric Clapton.I like this song very much.The girst of lyics is about one night a story of babality took place on himeself and his wife.The soft slow melody and moving background music make me feel very comfortable.We can be easy to read out the singer^s love to his wife .I am admired at him very much and I like the song .S I introduced the song to you and I hope you may like it .To the world you may be one person ,but to one person you may be the world.Love exsists in our ordinary action .We don^t need sky-rocking and earth shaking .because we have love .That^s enough.
中间有个词打错了是banality，好像还有别的错误，望指正
一楼那位大哥，哪里错了您告诉我呀==
由于改错和指出错误放在一起看起来很混乱,先放上修改后的：
The song by a British singer Eric Clapton is one of my favorite songs.The lyics retells a story of a normal couple's life.The soft slow melody and moving background music makes me feel very comfortable.We can easily discern the singer's love for his wife.I admire him very much,therefore I want to introduce this song to you and I hope that you will like it.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the whole world.Love exsists in our every action.We don't need to be sky-rocking or earth shaking because we have love,and that's enough.
指出错误：
This song^s singing on stage is a British singer Eric Clapton【此句不通,暂理解为是要说：这首歌的演唱者是英国歌手Eric Clapton】.I like this song very much.The girst 【查字典后发现这个词只有和birthday连用过,还是周岁的意思 = =】of lyics is about one night a story of babality【这个词虽然是有平凡的意思,可是它一般做陈腐讲.用错词了,而且拼写错误.】 took place on 【介词错误,应该是between】himeself and his wife.The soft slow melody and moving background music make 【应该加s】me feel very comfortable.We can be easy to read out 【不通.是想说我们可以清楚的了解吧?可你说的是：我们很容易被看懂 = =】the singer^【应该是'】s love to 【介词错误,是for】his wife .I am admired 【你说的不是你崇拜他,而是你被崇拜 = =】at him very much and I like the song【前面已经说过,重复了】 .S【单词没有打全,估计是so】 I introduced 【为啥要用过去时态?你是正在介绍,而不是介绍完毕了 = =】the song to you and I hope you may 【用will】like it .To the world you may be one person ,but to one person you may be the world.Love exsists in our ordinary 【用every就可以了】action .We don^【应该是'】t need sky-rocking and earth shaking 【缺少名词】.because we have love .That^【应该是'】s enough.
天上~
注：在修改后的版本中,为了文章通顺性,有些句子被删改了~如果不明白,可以HI我~
The song by a British singer Eric Clapton is one of my favorite songs.The lyics retells a story of a normal couple's life.The soft slow melody and moving background music makes me feel very comfortable.We can easily discern the singer's love for his wife.I admire him very much,therefore I want to introduce this song to you and I hope that you will like it.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the whole world.Love exsists in our every action.We don't need to be sky-rocking or earth shaking because we have love,and that's enough.
指出错误：
This song^s singing on stage is a British singer Eric Clapton【此句不通,暂理解为是要说：这首歌的演唱者是英国歌手Eric Clapton】.I like this song very much.The girst 【查字典后发现这个词只有和birthday连用过,还是周岁的意思 = =】of lyics is about one night a story of babality【这个词虽然是有平凡的意思,可是它一般做陈腐讲.用错词了,而且拼写错误.】 took place on 【介词错误,应该是between】himeself and his wife.The soft slow melody and moving background music make 【应该加s】me feel very comfortable.We can be easy to read out 【不通.是想说我们可以清楚的了解吧?可你说的是：我们很容易被看懂 = =】the singer^【应该是'】s love to 【介词错误,是for】his wife .I am admired 【你说的不是你崇拜他,而是你被崇拜 = =】at him very much and I like the song【前面已经说过,重复了】 .S【单词没有打全,估计是so】 I introduced 【为啥要用过去时态?你是正在介绍,而不是介绍完毕了 = =】the song to you and I hope you may 【用will】like it .To the world you may be one person ,but to one person you may be the world.Love exsists in our ordinary 【用every就可以了】action .We don^【应该是'】t need sky-rocking and earth shaking 【缺少名词】.because we have love .That^【应该是'】s enough.
天上~
注：在修改后的版本中,为了文章通顺性,有些句子被删改了~如果不明白,可以HI我~