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请帮忙确认这样翻译有没有什么语法问题或者有哪里有更好的补充?谢谢!

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请帮忙确认这样翻译有没有什么语法问题或者有哪里有更好的补充?谢谢!
I have some problem with this MRB that I want you to help me. Why didn't you realize this problem at the first place? I mean that what you can do to prevent this from happening again? And our manager require a corrective action from you.
对于这个MRB我有一些问题需要你的帮忙. 为什么你们不能在第一时间发现这个问题?我的意思是你们可以做些什么来预防这种情况的再次发生? 我们的经理需要一个你们的纠正措施.
I have some [problem=questions?] with this MRB that I want you to help me.
Why didn't you realize this problem [at=in] the first place?I mean that what you [can do=could have done] to prevent [this=it] from happening [again=这'again'需要吗?]
[And=delete!] Our manager requires a [corrective=remedial] action from you [immediately].
再问: I have some problems with this MRB that I want you to help me. Why didn't you realize this problem in the first place? I mean that what you could have done to prevent it from happening again? 这样对吗?
再答: OK.
'again'需要吗?指下一次/未来或是当天(That day)?
'problem' 或是 'question'呀?
再问: again我觉得放着会不会好点?因为我要强调的是怎么去防止再次发生这种事情。换成questions好点,嘿嘿。
再答: (1) 防止下一次再次发生...才用"again".但句子要换成:
I mean to say: what would you do to prevent it from happening again?

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