作业帮重新改了一下这篇小小短文,各位高手看看还有没有错.
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重新改了一下这篇小小短文,各位高手看看还有没有错.
I study in a primary school .
I go to school from Monday to Friday.
I study English ,Maths,Chinese,Science and Art.
I like English very much.
I am busy from seven in the morning to ten at night.
I get up at seven in the morning and go to bed at nine at night.
I have many hobbies.
I like taking photos and collecting stamps.
I study in a primary school .
I go to school from Monday to Friday.
I study English ,Maths,Chinese,Science and Art.
I like English very much.
I am busy from seven in the morning to ten at night.
I get up at seven in the morning and go to bed at nine at night.
I have many hobbies.
I like taking photos and collecting stamps.
I study in a primary school and go to school from Monday to Friday.
I study English ,Maths,Chinese,Science and Art at school.
and I like English very much.
I am busy from seven in the morning to ten at night.
I get up at 7 am and go to bed at 9 pm.
I have many hobbies.
among them I like taking photos and collecting stamps best.
这个作文很中式英语,每句意思都可以,就是连起来有些奇怪.太直接了.而且几点用am和pm就可以了,不要重复一直用 in the morning 和 at night,会显得筹字数.中间I am busy from seven in the morning to ten at night.I get up at 7 am and go to bed at 9 pm.这两句句子意思有些重复,写一个句子就好了.因为都是7到9点的时间段.而且意思有些怪,时间段冲突了,十点很忙,九点睡了.有点不可能吧.可以改成,I get up at 7 am and is very busy from then on till 9 pm .then I go to bed at 10 .
I study English ,Maths,Chinese,Science and Art at school.
and I like English very much.
I am busy from seven in the morning to ten at night.
I get up at 7 am and go to bed at 9 pm.
I have many hobbies.
among them I like taking photos and collecting stamps best.
这个作文很中式英语,每句意思都可以,就是连起来有些奇怪.太直接了.而且几点用am和pm就可以了,不要重复一直用 in the morning 和 at night,会显得筹字数.中间I am busy from seven in the morning to ten at night.I get up at 7 am and go to bed at 9 pm.这两句句子意思有些重复,写一个句子就好了.因为都是7到9点的时间段.而且意思有些怪,时间段冲突了,十点很忙,九点睡了.有点不可能吧.可以改成,I get up at 7 am and is very busy from then on till 9 pm .then I go to bed at 10 .