作业帮英文考试 这是短文改错 ◆◆◆急◆◆◆
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英文考试 这是短文改错 ◆◆◆急◆◆◆
How is everything I'm writing to tell you about The race be held next Thursday .you are one of the ten runner in your class in the race ,and you need to be at school gate by 1:30 p.m .that day The race began at 1:40 All rates will start from the gate .Then turn right and rum along Zhongshan Road till you see the traffic lights there you'll trun right again but keep running along Guang'an
How is everything I'm writing to tell you about The race be held next Thursday .you are one of the ten runner in your class in the race ,and you need to be at school gate by 1:30 p.m .that day The race began at 1:40 All rates will start from the gate .Then turn right and rum along Zhongshan Road till you see the traffic lights there you'll trun right again but keep running along Guang'an
1. to be held 偏将来 2. runners 3.at the school gate 确指,所以定冠词不能漏4 .will begin 用将来时态5. all rates 这里是不是打错了6. Turn right again 祈使句和前面保持一致 7. but改成and 这里没转折