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英语语法问题 读起来怪怪的
学习理论到实践知识,扩充视野,节省时间
understanding the past facilitates us solving problems,help us acquiring knowledge from theoretical to practical,broaden our horizons,save our time and improvethe efficiency.
为什么读起来怪怪的,感觉好不地道啊
求牛人改正!
Understanding the past facilitates us with problem-solving, helps us acquire knowledge from the theoretical to the practical, broadens our horizons and saves our time by improving efficiency.
第三人称单数你都忘记写了.还有这个句子有点太长了,最好分开剪短一点写,我只给你改了一些语法错误,比如 help + verb 原型.efficiency最好写一下是什么的efficiency,然后acquire knowledge from the theoritical to the practical建议写成transfer the theoritical knowledge into practical uses之类的.
我的建议是这样的:
Understanding the past can facilitate us with problem-solving and help us better transfer the theoritical knowledge to practical uses. It also broadens our horizons and saves our time by improving efficiency in decision-making and other aspects of our lives.
再问: 嗯 谢谢你的建议! 我是想用facilitate 作为动词 然后后面所有都用动名词的形式来做平行列举,不过我对help的用法的确不太清晰。
再答: 那你也可以继续那样子写,只是我觉得有点长,一般不会写那么长,不过你看咯,你的句子嘛~ 满意请采纳哦