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My best friend Peter is a very shy boy.He wanted to a new bicycle.But it's expensive.His mother didn't want buy this bicycle to him.Peter was angry.Peter didn't have friends.He was unpleasant...... Well,I think he should talk with his mom about this.He shouldn't agreed to his mom.He could get a part--time job in Sunday.He could borrow some money with his brother or sister.And he could buy another bicycle. 请帮忙评改一下
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My best friend Peter is a very shy boy.He wanted to (buy )a new bicycle.But it's expensive.His mother didn't want (to)buy this bicycle to (for)him.Peter was angry.Peter didn't have friends.He was unpleasant......
Well,I think he should talk with his mom about this(it).He shouldn't agreed to his mom. (He shouldn't argue with his mom.))He could get a part--time job in (on)Sunday.He could borrow some money with(from) his brother or sister.And (Then )he could buy another bicycle.
文章的思路总体不错，句子结构基本正确。但要注意一些固定短语的用法。
快乐每一天！
最终答案：略
解题过程：
My best friend Peter is a very shy boy.He wanted to (buy )a new bicycle.But it's expensive.His mother didn't want (to)buy this bicycle to (for)him.Peter was angry.Peter didn't have friends.He was unpleasant......
Well,I think he should talk with his mom about this(it).He shouldn't agreed to his mom. (He shouldn't argue with his mom.))He could get a part--time job in (on)Sunday.He could borrow some money with(from) his brother or sister.And (Then )he could buy another bicycle.
文章的思路总体不错，句子结构基本正确。但要注意一些固定短语的用法。
快乐每一天！
最终答案：略