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短文改错(共10小题,每题1分,满分10分)

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短文改错(共10小题,每题1分,满分10分)
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有十处语言错误,要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个词。
增加:在缺词处加上一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改十处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Tom and Dick are next door friend who both work in same office so they often walk together to and from office. One day they were walking to home together while it suddenly started to rain. Tom quickly open his umbrella and said proud, “My wife had great foresight. She said this morning it would rain and told me to carry my umbrella with myself.” Dick smiled and walked closely to him under the protection of Tom’s umbrella, said “My wife had ever greater foresight. She didn’t let me carry my umbrella as she knew you would have yours with you.



1.Tom and Dick是句子的主语,Tom 和Dick是邻居朋友……。显然friend应为复数,即应写为:friends.
2.same必须与定冠词the连用。故same前必须加上the.
3.home为副词,不能说walk to home,只能说walk home.又如:go home,不说go to home.所以句中One day they were walking to home…必须删掉介词to.
4.此句的意思是:有一天他们正一起回家,此时天突然开始下起雨来了。而while的意思是“当……时候”,应该为when,这里的when等于at that time; just then(就在此时)。
5.根据上下文可知,open应该为opened,即时态的一致性。
6.修饰动词应该用副词,故proud应改为proudly.句义为: “Tom迅速打开雨伞,自豪地说:……”
7.carry sth. with sb.意为“随身携带某物”。故应为代词宾格,myself改为me.
8.close to意为“靠近”。close可以用作副词。故closely改为close.而closely的意思是“紧密地,亲近地”。
9.said应改为saying,这里应该用现在分词,表示伴随情况。
10.ever只能用在比较级和最高级后,表示强调。如:He feels better than he has ever felt before.(他从未感觉这么好过。)而even与adj. / adv.比较级连用时,表示“更加,愈”。又如:Smith was speaking even more slowly than usual.(Smith说的比平常还要慢。)