作业帮英语作文 请指出我的英语错误并麻烦丰富一下
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英语作文 请指出我的英语错误并麻烦丰富一下
Dear Madam:
My name is Zhang Hong.I want to take part in this campaign because I want to improve my speaking English and know about the culture of Ameica.I am interested in enjoying English music.I have a good time traveling with my parents and my friends.I am good at writing.I would like toLive with a friendly Amrican family which has a child who is the same years old as me .Please will write to me soon
Yours,
Zhang Hong
Dear Madam:
My name is Zhang Hong.I want to take part in this campaign because I want to improve my speaking English and know about the culture of Ameica.I am interested in enjoying English music.I have a good time traveling with my parents and my friends.I am good at writing.I would like toLive with a friendly Amrican family which has a child who is the same years old as me .Please will write to me soon
Yours,
Zhang Hong
错误：Please will write to me soon这个句子有错误：无主语,可以这么改：加一个主语You
或去掉will
丰富：①第一句：改为I am a boy whose name is Zhang Hong.
②I am interested in enjoying English music.可以改为：I am very pleased when I listen to English music.
③I have a good time traveling with my parents and my friends.改为：I am happy that I have a good time traveling with my parents and my friends
或去掉will
丰富：①第一句：改为I am a boy whose name is Zhang Hong.
②I am interested in enjoying English music.可以改为：I am very pleased when I listen to English music.
③I have a good time traveling with my parents and my friends.改为：I am happy that I have a good time traveling with my parents and my friends
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