decline letter请修改

decline letter请修改
Dear Ms.XXX,
I am very fortunate that you give me offer
and I am truly appreciate the opportunity the work with you.
unfortunately,now I must say sorry...that I have to decline the offer.due to my present job have not taken over to the suitable one till now.the boss talked to me many many times to stay...even today he persuaded me all day...
After careful thought and with great reget that I have to say sorry to you...to be frank,I think I am not doing the right thing,just am doing the good thing,Sincerely hope my foolish decision will not hurt you...I believe you can understand and forgive me...
I still want express again my deep gratefulness to your offer and warm welcome.I hope and am sure we will have opportunity to cooperate in the future.
All best wished to you and your family for the Coming New Year!
Sincerly,
xxx

Dear Ms.XXX,
I am very fortunate that you give me offer
and I am truly appreciate the opportunity the work with you.
Use this instead:
"Thank you for your offer,and I truly appreciate the opportunity to work with you."
Since declination letters usually do start off with a 'thank you'.
unfortunately,now I must say sorry...that I have to decline the offer.due to my present job have not taken over to the suitable one till now.the boss talked to me many many times to stay...even today he persuaded me all day...
"Unfortunately,I am sorry to say that I must decline due to my present job obligations."
It's up to you if you want to put something more like:
"My boss as persuaded me to stay with the company many times."
After careful thought and with great reget that I have to say sorry to you...to be frank,I think I am not doing the right thing,just am doing the good thing,Sincerely hope my foolish decision will not hurt you...I believe you can understand and forgive me...
"After careful thought,and with great regret,I decided to stay with the company.To be frank,I'm not sure if I'm making the best decision,but it feels like the right one.I sincerely hope this will not cause any complications for you,and I believe you would understand and forgive me."
I still want express again my deep gratefulness to your offer and warm welcome.I hope and am sure we will have opportunity to cooperate in the future.
"I would like to express again,my deep gratefulness to your offer.I hope we will have the opportunity to cooperate in the future."
All best wished to you and your family for the Coming New Year!
"All the best wishes to you and your family for the coming new year!"
Sincerely,
xxx
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