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我的语法对么I do not trust the fate,slso will not just be passenge

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我的语法对么I do not trust the fate,slso will not just be passenger A in your life.Even if do not undersdand all of u,at least I will always stay by your side 我写的句子
1、trust是信任,意思不对,believe in fate才是相信命运.
2、also不能直接当连词用,你必须加上and或者but
3、will not意思不对,用一般现在时(将来不当过客,现在就可以当?),最好加上want
4、passenge确实是路人,但是没有过客的意思,你可以用tranveller或者transient
5、Even if是连词,要加主语
6、do not understand不能用一般现在时,用现在完成时表达“现在还不理解”
7、understand也不是“了解”的意思,not understand you一般用来形容没听懂对方在说什么
8、at least用着太傻了,它有“反正”,在这里就变成了“我不懂,反正我要呆在你旁边”
9、如果你不是要表达“我支持你”,就不要用by your side
下面我的意见:
I don‘t believe in the Fate,and also I don't wanna be someone who just crossed your life.Even if I haven't known you much,I am always willing to be with you.
再问: I do not believe in fate,and also never just be a passerby in your life.Even if I havent been the one who most konwn u,at least i willing to be with u whenever这样可否
再答: 1、do never be (动词原形不要单独使用,放在情态动词后面) 2、known you most(副词放在最后) 3、I am willing to(willing不管是形容词性还是现在分词,都要带be动词)