作业帮初一英语作文,大家帮我改改,
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初一英语作文,大家帮我改改,
Hello!Everyone.Today is Monday.In the early morning.I am sleeping now.The weather is windy in the early morning.In the morning.I am get up.The weather is sunny in the morning.I usually read a book in the morning .In the afternoon.I am go to school.The weather is cloudy .I think it is going to rain.In the evening.Really rainy!I don’t have an umbrella.I am sad.Because I don’t like rainy.
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Hello!Everyone.Today is Monday.In the early morning.I am sleeping now.The weather is windy in the early morning.In the morning.I am get up.The weather is sunny in the morning.I usually read a book in the morning .In the afternoon.I am go to school.The weather is cloudy .I think it is going to rain.In the evening.Really rainy!I don’t have an umbrella.I am sad.Because I don’t like rainy.
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Hello!Everyone.
Today is Monday and it was windy in the early morning.
I was still sleeping .
Later,I got up.The weather became sunny .
I usually read a book in the morning .
Afternoon.I got to school.The weather became cloudy .I thought it was going to rain.
In the evening.Really it's rainy!
I didn’t have an umbrella with me.I was unhappy because I don't like rainy.
（首先,这篇的时态很混乱,这是一个记叙文,所以主要要用过去式,另外你在记述的时候最好不要提到你平时在做什么.还有一般我们说天风大是用 it 指代天气,不需要说 the weather.
你是写的周一做的事,你中间提到“你经常在早上读书”,这样你自己也会不清晰,不明白自己到底要写什么时态.
比较明显的错误我帮你纠正了,没法帮你改太多,你还是自己多多学习吧.）
Today is Monday and it was windy in the early morning.
I was still sleeping .
Later,I got up.The weather became sunny .
I usually read a book in the morning .
Afternoon.I got to school.The weather became cloudy .I thought it was going to rain.
In the evening.Really it's rainy!
I didn’t have an umbrella with me.I was unhappy because I don't like rainy.
（首先,这篇的时态很混乱,这是一个记叙文,所以主要要用过去式,另外你在记述的时候最好不要提到你平时在做什么.还有一般我们说天风大是用 it 指代天气,不需要说 the weather.
你是写的周一做的事,你中间提到“你经常在早上读书”,这样你自己也会不清晰,不明白自己到底要写什么时态.
比较明显的错误我帮你纠正了,没法帮你改太多,你还是自己多多学习吧.）