作业帮作文的修改
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作文的修改
解题思路： 8.You also need ask for the experienced people learn some thing from them 改为 You also need ask the experienced people for something useful and practical .
解题过程：
1. and a year more serious than a year（中式英语)改为 : and will be more serious year after year.
2.So your hometown need you改为： So you hometown needs you(三单动词加s)
3.The government has give lots of preferential policy to people who like you study environment protection 改为：The government has given lots of preferential policies to people who are in need of graduates majoring in environment protection.
4. you will can take your advantage better改为 you can make use of your advantages better
5. your parents are all in your hometown改为 your parents are both in your hometown.
6.I don't know many thing about environment protection改为 I don't know many things about environment protection.
7.and lear more technologic about environment protection改为 and learn more technologies about environment protection
最终答案： 见上文
解题过程：
1. and a year more serious than a year（中式英语)改为 : and will be more serious year after year.
2.So your hometown need you改为： So you hometown needs you(三单动词加s)
3.The government has give lots of preferential policy to people who like you study environment protection 改为：The government has given lots of preferential policies to people who are in need of graduates majoring in environment protection.
4. you will can take your advantage better改为 you can make use of your advantages better
5. your parents are all in your hometown改为 your parents are both in your hometown.
6.I don't know many thing about environment protection改为 I don't know many things about environment protection.
7.and lear more technologic about environment protection改为 and learn more technologies about environment protection
最终答案： 见上文