一篇关于designer的作文,麻烦修改语法错,还有你看不惯的句子,

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一篇关于designer的作文,麻烦修改语法错,还有你看不惯的句子,
Designers,are also
artists or inventors sometimes.Almost everything we use are designed by
various designers,such as a mobile phone,a photo frame and a notebook.Some
of their products are useful,some are gorgeous,and others are creative.They often
have their own room to create without others to disturb.Actually,designersand their works certainly did change our life.

Sometimes,designers can also be artists or inventors.Everything we use or bring us convenience are designed by various designers,such as mobile phones,photo frames ,notebooks and so on.Some of the products are useful,while some maybe gorgeous and others are creative.They often have their own room for creativity in case that they would be disturbed by others.Actually,designers and their works do change our life for sure.
再问：当中那个while不用可以吗？？while是怎么用的？
再答：可以，我用while是个人习惯，表示与此同时... 欢迎追问~

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