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看看有没有语法错误 大小写就不用了
I’m very happy and I like to make friends with others.I also like computer game but music is my Favorite.Do you know what the westlife is .that is my Favorite band.my Favorite song is seasons in the sun.
Today I want to you a new.Michael Joseph Jackson died in 26 june.He is my Favorite.singer.I am looking forward to a Concert.But he died “One person you will not be lonely “is my Favorites song,too.if you have Favorites song,I wish we can can share.That all ,thank you.
computer games
look forward to后面不能加名词 i hope to see a concert
第五行want to后边少一个动词,i wish we can后面多了一个can
最后一句that’s all