请点评一下这篇短文live in a small house which is white.In the lovely

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请点评一下这篇短文
live in a small house which is white.In the lovely house,there are a clean dining room,two beautiful bedrooms,a big living room and a small kitchen.My family and I can watch TV in the living room and we can have our dinners in the dining room.In the beautiful bedrooms,we can sleep well,and have good dreams.My mum can cook many nice things in the litchen.

我觉得首先你是四年级的话还是很不错的,但是文章里存在不少问题,但是由于时年纪,我就不深说了,但是一些语法点还是给你提一下.
there are a clean dining room,two beautiful bedrooms,a big living room and a small kitchen.
这句话似乎没什么问题,但是实际问题很大,are a 在一起,产生歧异,这句话应该改成.There are five rooms in my family,they are .这样说才明白啊.
其次,dinners 不可数.
最后,litchen.拼写错误kitchen.
最后总结一下,词汇太简单而且用得不太准确,但是你时年纪,还是写的很不错,可以鼓励一下的,西西

请帮忙修改一篇短文I live in a small house. It’s white. In my house th 英语翻译a huge animal which is white and live in the North Pole. this is a house in which I live=this is a house where i live This is the house in __I used to live A.that B/ which C.wher The house where/in which we live is not big.这句话的意思? 阅读理解,英语短文Mr.and Mrs.Brown live in a small house near London the white cat is in the white house.针对in the white house划线提问 The house which I live in is large.的 which 可不可以省略? I live in a small house.I've got two friends.One is a rabbit The house is too small for his family to live in为什么用to The house is too small for his family to live in 1We live in a house.Its garden is very small 改为定语从句