求修改英语Many people want their new ideas and wishes come true.T

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求修改英语
Many people want their new ideas and wishes come true.They want to invent something new.I was one of them.When I grow up,I want to be a photographer.Make many beautiful scenery forever,record the people a moment of happiness,and sighed with emotion at the same time the fast passage of time.Maybe I couldn't a few times in the memory so much scenery,but the photos will be my record book.

1.”come true“改为“to come true”
2."Make many beautiful...passage of time"改为“I want to make many beautiful...passage of time"【或者你自己把want to 改为别的词,避免重复.（你这句话没有主语,要么加主语,要么改成前一句话的状语】
3.”couldn't"后面得加动词
4.“in the memory so much scenery”改成“in the memory with so much scenery”
5.“and sighed with emotion at the same time the fast passage of time.”这句话看不懂你的句子成分,sighed 改为 sigh.你这句话是想说“在时间的飞速流逝中带着情感叹息”吗
初中水平请谅解

求高手修改下这篇英文Preparation first:many people will want to don't g 10.As people want to ___________ their ideas ___________ qui She always has many new and good ideas是什么意思 I wish you a Happy New Year,all wishes come true! 三个英语修改病句 best wishes to the New Year 翻译：Many people have enough things and don't want too many gi 英语选择：young people want to make a new cultere____ their own. All the wishes will come true.翻译 May all your wishes come true 英语their own ideas 一个英语文章的概括,Today many Chinese people want to improve their En 英语翻译还有Some people get new ideas about their work from dream.