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一片英语论文. 美国大一水平

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一片英语论文. 美国大一水平
题目是
argue for the benefits and/or drawbacks that the new amateur culture such as facebook and youtube bring to us. 我把草稿给教授看 他说顶多得D
都要疯了我 .
请高手给点意见.
我应该选 什么作为 major claim 和 minor claims 呢 ?
enefits:keeps people connected
easy to make new friends
can talk with people around the world
helps with distance barrier; develops easier communication
spread news very fast (people get to know what's going on in the other part of the globe)
globalization
drawbacks:these communication methods are less sincere
less people talk face-to-face
people live in virtual worlds
too much time spent in front of the computer - develops solitude
- also less active physically,may lead to health problems such as obesity