作业帮英语短文改错 学的好的达人 一共10处 请一一指出啊
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英语短文改错 学的好的达人 一共10处 请一一指出啊
Dear Jack
How nice to hear from you again You want to know how is going on in our school.in short,
things had been improving since school began to carry out a new way of learning.in the past,
the teachers were always kept on explaining the points in class.we students just listened
and try to solve the ploblems raising by the teachers or us.After class,we enjoy different
kinds of activities instead doing endless homework.For example we can read what we are interesting
in.we can go to the library or surf the Internet for various kinds of information.In a word,
we are now masters of study but we are happy
Best wishes
Yours
Li Ming
Dear Jack
How nice to hear from you again You want to know how is going on in our school.in short,
things had been improving since school began to carry out a new way of learning.in the past,
the teachers were always kept on explaining the points in class.we students just listened
and try to solve the ploblems raising by the teachers or us.After class,we enjoy different
kinds of activities instead doing endless homework.For example we can read what we are interesting
in.we can go to the library or surf the Internet for various kinds of information.In a word,
we are now masters of study but we are happy
Best wishes
Yours
Li Ming
第一行 how 改为 what
第二行 had 改为 have
第二行 school 前面加个 the
第三行 were 去掉
第四行 raising 改为raised
第四行 us 改为 ourselves
第四行 enjoy 改为 enjoyed
instead 后面加入一个 of.
interesting 改为 interested
倒数第二行 but 改为 and
应该是改完了并且正确.
第二行 had 改为 have
第二行 school 前面加个 the
第三行 were 去掉
第四行 raising 改为raised
第四行 us 改为 ourselves
第四行 enjoy 改为 enjoyed
instead 后面加入一个 of.
interesting 改为 interested
倒数第二行 but 改为 and
应该是改完了并且正确.