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帮我检查一下英语文章my bedroon.
帮我检查一下有无错漏的地方,,
My Bedroom
This is my bedroom,there is a bed near the wall.Near mu bed,
there is a study,there are some books and a computer on my study.
there is a photo of my family on the wall.I often do my homework and play the computer games in my bedroom.
Can you feel my brdroom is very beautiful
帮我检查一下有无错漏的地方,,
My Bedroom
This is my bedroom,there is a bed near the wall.Near mu bed,
there is a study,there are some books and a computer on my study.
there is a photo of my family on the wall.I often do my homework and play the computer games in my bedroom.
Can you feel my brdroom is very beautiful
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My Bedroom
This is my bedroom,there is a bed next to the wall.Near my bed,there is a desk.There are some books and a computer on it.There is a photo of my family on the wall.I often do my homework and play the computer games in my bedroom.
Do you think my brdroom is very beautiful
My Bedroom
This is my bedroom,there is a bed next to the wall.Near my bed,there is a desk.There are some books and a computer on it.There is a photo of my family on the wall.I often do my homework and play the computer games in my bedroom.
Do you think my brdroom is very beautiful