作业帮求指出英语作文的错误以及不足……
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求指出英语作文的错误以及不足……
Dear Kate,
Thank you for you Email.Now i would like to tell you something about the extracurricular reading in our school.my classmates prefer to play basketball and play computer games than to read books.
In my opinion,playing computer games not only takes much time but also is harmful to health.But in this age of information and communication,the computer plays an extremely important role .
Fortunately,reading is my favorite hobby .I can never stop the love for reading because books are like a wise teacher in my life .As we know ,books are the source of knowledge .I benefit a great deal from reading .
So i think reading is good for our study and life .
Best wishes!
Dear Kate,
Thank you for you Email.Now i would like to tell you something about the extracurricular reading in our school.my classmates prefer to play basketball and play computer games than to read books.
In my opinion,playing computer games not only takes much time but also is harmful to health.But in this age of information and communication,the computer plays an extremely important role .
Fortunately,reading is my favorite hobby .I can never stop the love for reading because books are like a wise teacher in my life .As we know ,books are the source of knowledge .I benefit a great deal from reading .
So i think reading is good for our study and life .
Best wishes!
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