英语短文求改错...我知道自己语法不好.....我自己写的..只是我也知道错误太多...As we all know,m

英语短文求改错...
我知道自己语法不好.....我自己写的..只是我也知道错误太多...
As we all know,many languages in this world.The linguisticians study found the human race all used 5651 languages.However,in common use languages only 13 kinds.In other words,a lot of people used lesser-known languages and but we do not know.
AS for now,a total of 6.4 billion people in earth.1.7 billion people speak English and Chinese(1.3 billion people speak Chinese and 0.5 billion people speak English,However,there are 500 million People to learning English in this world).Therefore 4.7 billon people speak remain 11 kinds of languages and some use lesser-known languages people in this 4.7 billon.
Linguistician invent a new language is to removed the barrier,but English can instead any new language.Because sense from the linguistic,English grammar is more easy than any languages.So we no need to learn a new language.
before 122 years,Poland doctor azarz Ludwik Zamenhof invent a new language.It is Esperanto.But we can see,after 122 years,only some people know this language,a little people learn this language.Because this language is man-made language,no have people can say this language's grammar is wrong and no have people say right.Because it not have criterion.So it can not be popular.
We can foresee,if we learn the new language,the lesser-known languages will become obsolete.The extinction of lesser-known languages represent the culture demise.I think,no have people want look at this situation.
先给30分,有答案的话再送30分...

1.many languages in this world..你这句子有谓语动词吗?
可以说 There are many languages in this world.
There be 结构放于句首 表示非人为主语的 ‘有’
2.研究发现用 study found?中式英语吧
我觉得直接用found就可以了
3.all use 没这说法、 可以在句尾用in all 表示总量
4.in common use languages only 13 kinds、
中英文语序是不一样的...
而且没有主语..可以用被动
only 13 languages are used in common..
介词短语作状语了什么的 一般放在最后
5.a lot of people used 为什么用过去式、?
用一般现在时就可以了..
6.lesser-known lesser 是 其次 的意思
你是想要比较级吧.其实这个不用 、 known用过去分词是表示被动么?
less－knwnn就可以了吧
7.and but we do not know
and but 二者只能用一个、
这里表示转折 用but
还有 we don't know 我们不知道什么啊
按照你前面句子的主语 是我们不知道那些人 而不是我们不知道的语言
这里可以用定语从句 嗯 从句就不用but了
a lot of people use lesse－known languages that we do not know
8.a total of 6.4 billion people in earth 和第一个问题一样、
there is 放前面
另外我觉得应该用the total of 而不是 a
in the Earth 地球前面要加the的
9.500 million People to learning English
这里为什么用to呢?有没有表示目的之类的意思
再说了 就算有to 后面也是跟动词原型啊
除了特殊的短语里to作介词后面动词加ing
其他都是原型拉、、
这里可以用现在进行时
there are 500 million People are learning English
10.therefore 后面是不是要加逗号?
11.remain 11 kinds of languages
remain的意思好像不是很明确..用other比较好、
12.some use lesser-known languages people in this 4.7 billon.
没看懂、
是想说有4.7 billon人用那些很少有人知道的语言?
用4.7billon people代替some
4.7billon people use lesse-known languages
13.Linguistician invent a new language is to removed the barrier
怎么能有两个动词呢?invent 和is..一个句子里面要是有两个动词、
必须有从句..这里把is去掉就可以了 然后 removed 用原型
14.Because不能单另起一个句子 ..只能是 句子,because.
15.because只能引导句子、 你这里 语言学意义是个短语
应该用because of the sense of the linguistic 语言学的意义
从属关系 用of
16.more easy easy的比较级是easily －－..
17.we no need to learn a new language ..唉
没有动词直接否定的 可以用 don't need
而且need可以做情态动词..所以也可以说
we need not learn...
18.before 122 years..－－..
单另拿出来就是122 years ago..放在句尾才是before 122 years
19.invent a new language 都一百二十二年前了 还不用过去式?invented
20.only some people know this language
some代表的数量还是比较多的 这里可以用few
几乎没人 或者说很少很少人知道
21.no have people －－ 没有人?there is no people
22.Because it not have criterion
要么就there isn't a criterion
要么就 it isn't have a creterion
23.represent the culture demise..
从属、 represent the demise of culture
24.no have people 如上
25.want 后面加 to
want to do sth
look at 是动词短语 看的意思 强调 看的动作
这里应该用看到 see 就可以了
＝＝
－－ 你该好好努力了
－－ 累死我了