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语法改错When I was a student,I was eager to be a journalist.Ever

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语法改错
When I was a student,I was eager to be a journalist.Every morning I get the assignment from the editor and go out to take some unforgettable photograph with a professional photographer who will assist me in finishing the task.And I will interview some people who was involved in some special cases .I think the day like that is delighted and the job as a journalist is admirable.In the meanwhile ,it will let me live an unusual life.
帮我看看有没有什么问题 有没有什么语法错误 或者更好的说法
第一句 when i was a student 可不可以把i was 去掉?
When I was a student,I was eager to be a journalist.Every morning I get the assignment from the editor and go out to take some unforgettable (photograph改成photographs) with a professional photographer who will assist me in finishing the task.And I will interview some people who( was改成were) involved in some special cases .I think the day like that is (delighted改成delightful) and the job as a journalist is admirable.In the meanwhile ,it will let me live an unusual life
请问一共几个错误?
再问: 谢谢 不固定几个错误 我自己写的 帮忙看看有没有什么问题 I think the day like that is (delighted改成delightful) 可不可以写成 the day like that makes me delighted? 第一句 when i was a student 可不可以把i was 去掉?
再答: the day like that makes me delighted可以这样表达 不可以去掉was 如果对你有所帮助,请点击本页面中的“选为满意回答”按钮,谢谢!